Deepest words embraced her heart.
Coldest dews tickled her eyes.
Bathed in fresh morning fragrance.
Sun rays blessed her for a day.
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A refined taste of great poetry could be felt in the poem, Geetha. The incoming burden of the tomorrow is really painful for a sensative heart. Thanks for sharing.
Deepest words embraced heart of a reader as this poem is very beautifully crafted. Revisiting this poem values more. Memories of life remain ashore...10
'Is there another day to rise? '- - This poem has a subtle power to break the readers' heart. I appreciate your delicate touch on a topic that sometimes is delivered with a sledge hammer by some poets. Well written, Geetha. Very well-written.
Life and death are but two sides of a coin. Let memories of life stay for ever.
Live your life well as you wish it :) because life is a gift for you, so just ride your journey regardless what it looks at the moment but the whole experience is yours and never for others....make it great then :)
A day before death May or may not be brightest filled with flavours of memoirs carried over the balance sheet of life
It is a beautiful poem on life and death having intensive write. Thanks for sharing....10
Touching hearts of the readers, a great poem on life and death. What I think if you believe in a life after death, you'll get it but if you don't believe in a life after death, you'll not get it. Imagine the peace at the time of death one enjoys that he will get another life and imagine the pain of one who believes that he is going to be finished for ever.
Such a great poem, Geetha. There something wonderful about that first stanza....The elements of the day of portrayed as an old friend arriving to deliver a tremendous blessing. Superbly done!
'May have to depart just once. Leaving all the flavors of life. Leaving all the memories of life' - Sounds so poignant, but bitter truth! Loved the comment of poet Susan Williams.