A lot of strain on her heart
Dark circles beneath her eyes
Love and Hope have broken up
She fears shockingly and cries
Gabriel came and inspired
A clean break with the past
Stand tall, dry the tears
Just adjust the life's contrast
(2008/10/16)
Still struggling to adjust, , , , , , , persian, , , thanx for sharing, a 10
struggle is the main in life. well expressed............10+
thats nice have a clean break and start again ++++10 as always regards anjali
Life's contrast is a reality everyone knows; but the way you portrayed it in 8 simple looking lines is truly amazing... Loved it... Regards, Kamran
thanks for sharing this wonderful words of poetry. well done my friend.
An excellent poem Shiraz! A delight to read indeed! ! Best wishes! *10*! ! Friend Thad
What a nice angelic theme in a very short piece! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! Angels always touch our hearts to be in a moment of peace and be in a bliss...a 10.
Sometimes we need to make a clean break and start again, wise words as always, 10 Lynda xx
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
This is a pondered look on life that is expressed here. Despite of pain, the 'clean' consideration of the best way to follow is the wisest advice to follow... Contrast between pain/past and a clear future is very well built here.10!