ramesh rai

Gold Star - 27,453 Points (13.12.1955 / howrah)

Light Sound Camera Action - Poem by ramesh rai

Light!

Sound!

Camera!

Action!

Cut! Cut!

Retake

but in real life
there is no retake
each shot is final

each scene is captured
by universal camera
entire nature is audience
God is judge
to declare
best actor
best actoress
best villian
best comedian
and so on

there is no rehearsal
no retake
so ensure
each shot
best shot


Comments about Light Sound Camera Action by ramesh rai

  • Brian Jani (6/29/2014 12:15:00 PM)

    nice poem man life is a camera.no retakes ever. (Report)Reply

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  • David Wood (8/12/2013 6:01:00 AM)

    Very true words, in real life there is no retake. (Report)Reply

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  • Heather Wilkins (8/10/2013 6:23:00 PM)

    in real life there is no retake. so we must try to get it right the first time. excellent write (Report)Reply

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  • Geetha Jayakumar (8/7/2013 8:05:00 AM)

    Beautiful write...In real life not retake...Well written. Loved reading it. (Report)Reply

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  • Nasarudheen Parameswaran (8/7/2013 8:00:00 AM)

    Very beautiful poem both in content and form. (Report)Reply

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  • Tribhawan Kaul (8/6/2013 2:42:00 AM)

    Great poem. There are definitely no retakes in life which enacts itself on the stage of this universe. Happy writing. (Report)Reply

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  • Tirupathi Chandrupatla (8/5/2013 2:18:00 PM)

    There is no rehearsal, there is no retake in real life. Beautiful poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Hazel Durham (8/5/2013 5:08:00 AM)

    All we can do is try our best and when we don't to not carry our mistakes around, to let go and to find happiness within our hearts!
    Original and beautiful write!
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  • Elena Sandu (8/5/2013 2:10:00 AM)

    True. Wish I could do my best for each moment of my life... unfortunately most of the time fail, than I spend a while trying to patch each hole. Sometimes, (rarely) I manage to have a beautiful clad. Wish any of us to be forgiven, and given a second chance, as maybe we need to learn from own mistakes. (Report)Reply

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  • Shahzia Batool (8/4/2013 11:32:00 PM)

    a further step and a modern re-interpretation of the great universal analogy of the world as a Stage given by Shakespeare in All the world is a stage! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (8/4/2013 11:01:00 PM)

    a beautiful poem, but in real life
    there is no retake
    each shot is final
    that we always have to strive to the
    best of our ability.. a great write.
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  • Gajanan Mishra (8/4/2013 8:20:00 PM)

    each shot is final, great write, thanks. (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Sunday, August 4, 2013

Poem Edited: Monday, August 5, 2013


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