Limerick.23. Precaution Poem by Valsa George

Limerick.23. Precaution

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A naughty porcupine lives on a hill
He has sharp and piercing quill
Nobody pets him,
Nobody frets him,
For being pricked by his quill is hell

Tuesday, October 14, 2014
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick,pets
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Tirupathi Chandrupatla 14 October 2014

What a naughty porcupine! Nice caution delivered through the limerick.

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 14 October 2014

Nobody pets and nobody frets for being pricked by his quill.......Valsa....phenomenal write.......beautifully put

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Kee Thampi 14 October 2014

a tiny knot of naughty porcupine the mind of man

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Akhtar Jawad 14 October 2014

His quill has been used to make pens for writing, I have seen this animal even in the plains. An untouched topic.

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Savita Tyagi 27 October 2014

So true! Stay away from porcupine and their likes!

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Dinesan Madathil 19 October 2014

The subject matter chosen for this limerick has enough potential to be developed into a long poem. But brevity being the primary structural limit or beauty of a limerick this write has to be so. A fine write from you Valsa Madam.

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Hazel Durham 19 October 2014

Be aware to avoid painful situations, be good to yourself, lovely limerick!

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Kumarmani Mahakul 18 October 2014

Trouble should be avoided, precaution should be taken at first. Nice awareness poem.

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Tribhawan Kaul 15 October 2014

One of the traits in some of the humans too....ha ha ha...lovely limerik...enjoyed :)

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