Valsa George

Limerick.50. Heaven's Justice - Poem by Valsa George

He stood so shocked at Heaven’s door
Not by its splendor nor its décor
But by the folks already in
Those who had very many sin
Pick pockets, prostitutes, rogues and more

Topic(s) of this poem: limerick

Comments about Limerick.50. Heaven's Justice by Valsa George

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/3/2017 11:15:00 AM)

    Those who had very many sin
    Pick pockets, prostitutes, rogues and more... are punished as per heaven justice. Beautifullly inscribed. Thanks for sharing.
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  • (9/30/2015 1:28:00 AM)

    Looks like there's hope for me after all.
    Thanks Valsa.-10
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  • Hazel Durham (9/6/2015 6:43:00 AM)

    Great write, thought provoking, God's justice is mighty, there is goodness in everyone! (Report) Reply

  • Madathil Rajendran Nair (9/4/2015 1:28:00 PM)

    Good sarcastic limerick. That is why perhaps it is called heaven - everyone can flourish. (Report) Reply

  • Ruby Mostazir (9/2/2015 11:47:00 AM)

    I agree with akhter jawad...he knows everything! !

    Yes he knows abt every heart.....and he have lots of mercy :)
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  • Roop Rekha Bhaskar (9/2/2015 12:59:00 AM)

    Liked it! On a personal note thank you for sharing your knowledge on Limerick. (Report) Reply

  • Akhtar Jawad (9/1/2015 2:12:00 AM)

    Pick pockets, prostitutes, rogues and more, even your friend Akhtar Jawad, are helpless before the fate. We know nothing but He knows everything! (Report) Reply

  • Bernard Snyder (9/1/2015 12:45:00 AM)

    Deep imagination required. Interesting poem Valsa. Thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (8/31/2015 11:36:00 PM)

    Forgiveness allows entrance to all (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Monday, August 31, 2015

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