Limerick.62. Yummy Soup Poem by Valsa George

Limerick.62. Yummy Soup

Rating: 5.0


Some flies reeling, fell into the soup.
As Peter ladled to have a scoop,
He asked in shock,
with a severe choke
'Is it chicken soup or fly soup? '

Friday, October 23, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Gajanan Mishra 23 October 2015

beautiful - chicken soup or fly soup.. thanks.

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Sanjukta Nag 23 October 2015

Poor Peter! Amusing indeed. Good one.

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Loke Kok Yee 23 October 2015

I think he is in hot soup Thanks for the laugh Valsa-10++

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Rajnish Manga 23 October 2015

Peter seems to be in a fix not about whether to leave it or gulp it but about whether to gulp it as chicken soup or as a fly soup. Thanks for this fun filled poem.

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Jaishree Nair 23 October 2015

Limerick loaded with humour. Enjoyed.Thanks for sharing

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Narayana Aghalaya 04 April 2018

wow! he has to reconcile to relish fly soup!

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M Asim Nehal 12 November 2015

Ha ha............Whatever it be but limerick turned out to be funny....Liked it Madam.

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Mantu Mahakul 02 November 2015

Fun giving Limerick shared with interesting mind. Definitely interesting sharing. /10

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Roop Rekha Bhaskar 27 October 2015

Buy one soup and get some free...flies. At least it is better than eels on a fork. I'm wondering is there any aspect that does not put your pen on paper. Loved it

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 25 October 2015

Flies turn out to be a bonus for Peter. Ha ha ha.

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