As she bent down unintended
The old man's lewd eyes descended
Stuck on the two moon
Making him swoon
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Just fun, no offense intended!
Well, umm, that can be a little uncomfortable though! ! Thank you for sharing Valsa ma'am..
hehehehe you spoke the truth.... your gaze caught those wandering gaze and it is captured in words for ever. I can't help smiling. Thanks for making me smile.
Great Limerick Valsa, with lovely rhyming and you create such a vivid picture that is so realistic and funny!
Full of humor and wit. These apparently funny lines carry great depth. Loved it.
This is a perfect limerick, Valsa. Funny and a bit risqué. An evolutionary, instinctual and societally reinforced 'admiration' for certain female attributes, compels many male eyes to wander
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
By being observant, she capture a moment in life when an aged eye was roaming around. He got swooned, for what, I wander. Limerick makes us guessing. Enjoyed. Thank you Valsa. X