Limerick-80. Wandering Gaze Poem by Valsa George

Limerick-80. Wandering Gaze

Rating: 4.4


As she bent down unintended
The old man's lewd eyes descended
Stuck on the two moon
Making him swoon
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Just fun, no offense intended!

Monday, February 29, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sometimes we can be silly!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Jayatissa K. Liyanage 29 February 2016

By being observant, she capture a moment in life when an aged eye was roaming around. He got swooned, for what, I wander. Limerick makes us guessing. Enjoyed. Thank you Valsa. X

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Souren Mondal 29 February 2016

Well, umm, that can be a little uncomfortable though! ! Thank you for sharing Valsa ma'am..

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Aarzoo Mehek 29 February 2016

hehehehe you spoke the truth.... your gaze caught those wandering gaze and it is captured in words for ever. I can't help smiling. Thanks for making me smile.

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Hazel Durham 29 February 2016

Great Limerick Valsa, with lovely rhyming and you create such a vivid picture that is so realistic and funny!

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Akhtar Jawad 05 March 2018

An interesting Limerick, enjoyed it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 08 August 2016

With the ways of mankind on earth. Thanks for sharing.

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Nosheen Irfan 03 March 2016

Full of humor and wit. These apparently funny lines carry great depth. Loved it.

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Abderrahmane Dakir 29 February 2016

Great wisdom in this funny poem.

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Kelly Kurt 29 February 2016

This is a perfect limerick, Valsa. Funny and a bit risqué. An evolutionary, instinctual and societally reinforced 'admiration' for certain female attributes, compels many male eyes to wander

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