Limerick- 83. The Trinity Poem by Valsa George
Limerick- 83. The Trinity
Corruption is the mighty deity
All prone to it, clergy or laity
Unless in cash you give
Nothing will ever move
Conceit, Deceit, Lust- form a trinity
You have described the opposite of Holy Trinity with amazing clarity in a few words.
A frank appraisal of what's happening around us! Conceit, Deceit and Lust are three awful ingredients that can ruin an individual as well as a whole nation. Powerfully presented through a Limerick. A full score for you, Valsa!
A succinct description of truth we all know and are victim of, but find helpless in eradicating the same.
A marvelous Limerick is touchingly delineated by you. I appreciate the way of presentation. Thanks for sharing.
Unless in cash you give Nothing will ever move Conceit, Deceit, - form a trinity.facts......... well portrayed. tony
Conceit, Deceit, - form a trinity. Quite true dear poetess. Corruption the mighty devil has overpowered the ethics of. Let us mourn for the lost charm of humanity
Corruption is the mighty deity/All prone to it, clergy or laity...Amazing limerick dear madam! I love the way you invent things.....Enjoyed the humor (10)
As I see it, all the attributes of a successful politician, Thanks Valsa.
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I would like to translate this poem
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12/5/2025 7:39:23 AM # 1.0.0
Corruption! Destroying the systems on earth; putting us far behind the truth. Nice piece of work.