Limerick- 83. The Trinity Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- 83. The Trinity

Rating: 5.0


Corruption is the mighty deity
All prone to it, clergy or laity
Unless in cash you give
Nothing will ever move
Conceit, Deceit, Lust- form a trinity

Tuesday, April 19, 2016
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kevin Patrick 19 April 2016

The simple advice that I have learned is practice what you preach, if you cannot stand up to the beliefs you represent and act against that what the teachers stand for that creates hypocrisy. Conceit, Deceit, Lust- form a trinity That is the truth, and an ugly trinity it is. Bravo for saying it

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Nosheen Irfan 21 April 2016

Thats a powerful write. In this Limerick you have laid bare the bitter reality of this world in a light-hearted way but it hits hard nevertheless. A plus.

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Om Chawla 21 April 2016

A succinct description of truth we all know and are victim of, but find helpless in eradicating the same.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 21 April 2016

A frank appraisal of what's happening around us! Conceit, Deceit and Lust are three awful ingredients that can ruin an individual as well as a whole nation. Powerfully presented through a Limerick. A full score for you, Valsa!

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 22 April 2016

You have described the opposite of Holy Trinity with amazing clarity in a few words.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2019

A marvelous Limerick is touchingly delineated by you. I appreciate the way of presentation. Thanks for sharing.

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Dr Antony Theodore 06 August 2019

Unless in cash you give Nothing will ever move Conceit, Deceit, - form a trinity.facts......... well portrayed. tony

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Conceit, Deceit, - form a trinity. Quite true dear poetess. Corruption the mighty devil has overpowered the ethics of. Let us mourn for the lost charm of humanity

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Dr Dillip K Swain 27 July 2018

Corruption is the mighty deity/All prone to it, clergy or laity...Amazing limerick dear madam! I love the way you invent things.....Enjoyed the humor (10)

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Loke Kok Yee 07 January 2018

As I see it, all the attributes of a successful politician, Thanks Valsa.

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