Limerick- 95. Peeping Tom Poem by Valsa George

beautiful and meaningful

Funny n sad at the same time. A very meaningful write with a touch of humor. It drives the point home with so few words and in an endearingly witty manner.10

Wow! This is by all means a great limerick with great fun and a study into the behaviour of a Peering Tom. Enjoyed it thoroughly. Thanks, Valsa ji.

A well written and technically flawless piece

Great job on a limerick. You might want to check out my new ones.

Good job with this limerick. Not your usual style, but you seem to be able to handle any style with ease.

I Did Leap....[inspired by Peeping Tom by Valsa George, who inspired Akhtar Jawad to write Reply Of Peeping Tom To Valsa George With Due Apology.; very SHORT; short enough! ; lust; humour/humor] With Valsa ever on her guard, i crept into her flowery yard..., dressed in black in dark of night, and was rewarded....with pure delight! but then her husband spotted me. he spotted me in the potted tree.. which took me level with her sill. i leapt and my ankle hurts me still. i hobbled away as fast as i could, and escaped just in time [knock wood], before i heard the blast from his BIG gun. it seemed like hours i did then run.......... to the next stop on my nightly list. [i'm glad i didn't wrench my left wrist, without which i'd not enjoy it as much, and the rest of this poem is such and such.] (October 5th 2016) you started it, Valsa-girl! bri :)

She lodged a complaint against a poetess, Her mother locked the windows of access, After reading the uncalled limerick, She has become now too sick, No more wears her pink sexy dress. With due apology from naughty Akhtar Jawad.

Thanks for the humor, Valsa!

Bad character! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us.