An eighty year old was sent to a jail
The old man was denied even a bail
Kissed a girl in public
He injured her tender lip
Was seen as an offence of a large scale
What a fascinating limerick. So cleverly written. The curse of a stolen Kiss! I hope the old man will not stay in prison for life for a kiss and minor injury... Very entertaining write, Valsa . Loved reading it. Glad to know you are back, Valsa. Best wishes for your son's wedding. To my treasure chest.
I have tried and tried to write a limerick that had 10 syllables each in lines one, two and five and 7 each in lines three and four.- -my efforts have yet to result in anything understandable! You, dear Valsa, are a master of the form as well as other kinds of poems! ! ! And that old geezer was indeed a public menace! ! 10+ as usual
when one is old wants to kiss but is sans all what to do may be dentures protrude but kiss would do tender girl she loves her younger one and is morer friendly a She should have slapped him let him now stay in jail else many more kids he will derail pedophile eh
Eighty years old! oh! still hungry to kiss! ! ! Iustful character takes birth not to change itself! ! !
I am in my later sixties. Hope, never to be a culprit like him. A kiss is an expression of tender feelings, may be passionate too, but it is never a thing to be forced upon. Loved the humor hidden throughout the lines.
A common complaint against old men turned to be an interesting limerick here....lovely 10
you are wonderful //a poetess miss// and an inspiration for a simplistic poet this..//// PPME what knows he HAHAHA LOLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLL
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Hopefully, I have already read this amazing Limerick! I find all your limericks not only humorous but also technically perfect. Many people think that it's easy to pen Limerick but I find it difficult because I myself have tried many times but failed. You are really a wizard in this field. To MyPoemList