Limerick- Delirium Poem by Valsa George
Limerick- Delirium
In his sleep, he saw a wicked ghoul
Its sharp claws were as that of an owl
He ran out of his bed
Was senseless due to dread
Being naked, his wife cried out....' Foul
6 syllables each in lines 3 and 4)
Foul the undress somnambulist Before wife's eyes no shame at least Love in together Both feel divine fair Let it be though in frenzy beast
What a wonderful limerick and great imagination ! A creation with wit and humor as always. Very entertaining.
A grim and unsettling nightmare, I don't know if I would like to see the creature manifest from this dream! . Terror of your mind created this gothic delight.
A well crafted limerick piece. Truly humorous....5 stars *****
As you know, I have not liked limericks until I read one of yours and had my funny bone tickled! ! ! This is the 4th limerick of yours that I have read and each of them are so different in topic but like each other in humor. Fantastic construction and topic! ! ! Top marks!
Who said you could use my grandma's photo? At first i thought the husband was naked, then i thought maybe the wife or the ghoul. Which one? All three? ghoul/owl: (not a great rhyme; what to do?) ghoul pronounced /ɡo͞ol/ vs owl pronounced /oul/ Maybe use " Its claws were sharp, as is the ghoul rule" But i liked the poem anyway. The heck with a limerick rhyme scheme; just call it a poem! bri :)
Fine Limerick.....enjoyed it.....thank u......anjandev roy.
Dreadful dream of " The Limerick Queen" The pun as usual makes it very humous...10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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5/7/2024 1:04:40 PM # 1.0.0.1119
Ha ha ha, what a delirium! Structurally, a perfect limerick!