Limerick.- Face Lift Poem by Valsa George

A well written composition. Truly brilliant.....5 stars*****

Marvellous poem, Valsa! To think what all we do in life to look young and beautiful! . Specially dancers like me are applying make up and so much of adornment for each performance. I feel so relieved when everything is removed and the real face is seen in the mirror. The original face is innocent and beautiful.... :) ...Top stars Valsa

The limmeric satirically depicts human conditions. Thanks ValsaJi

Conceal! No matter to have it. Lips are open. Wonderful imaginary. Beautiful Limerick. Thanks for sharing.

The bane of vanity! to be swallowed by times gravity! . My mother has been readying her hair since she entered her 30s! and still looks good for her age, I bet the same goes for you Valsa. Either way your beauty as a writer shines through in this clever and humorous limerick. Well Enjoyed!

Re your poem 'Limerick. - Face Lift': - I'm pretty sure i left a comment here yesterday which i don't see, saying i'll use this in an upcoming showcase. I also see a comment from me from last year. bri : )

Ma'am your image is just magnificent. I fall for thst. Your limerick is awesome.

Why, Valsa, I'll bet YOUR natural beauty needs NO enhancing! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! : ) I'll send this to my upcoming (2nd) Aug. showcase. ;) bri

The rhythm in this limerick is perfect, Valsa. The content reminds me of two of humorous poems, one titled “My Sixty-Eight-Year-Old Self in the Mirror.” -Glen

And, in THIS photo, you've captured my sister, bless her heart. Overall, i enjoyed the poem, but....i COULD make some 'minor' suggestions, for which i'd only charge you my friendly rate of 369.229 rupees per suggestion. bri ;)