Limerick- You Aren't A Goon Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- You Aren't A Goon

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I wish to have a sunny laugh from you
In this time of stress, it's long overdue
You may fall on the floor
And may crawl on all four
Ignore if some think, you have a loose screw

Limerick- You Aren't A Goon
Monday, December 17, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: laughter,limerick
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Aniruddha Pathak 20 December 2018

Those talking of loose screw have not a token clue, Limericks, pink or blue, Are like morning's fresh dew. Perhaps you could have avoided an extra syllable in the first two lines, or may be a point I don't see.

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Valsa George 16 January 2019

Limericks, pink or blue, Are like morning's fresh dew...... Love these lines! Thank you!

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Prabir Gayen 20 December 2018

Fantastic limerick..........good poem

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Kumarmani Mahakul 22 December 2018

Having a sunny laugh means having a laughter based funny time ahead with great pleasure as we get today re-visiting this wonderful Limerick. Falling on the floor one can get a. An interesting sharing is done really.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 December 2018

You are a giant in penning these kind of poems! Enjoyed the humor! Happy new year 2019 to you and your family in advance!

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Bri Edwards 06 February 2019

i'm familiar with the 2nd definition of goon**. [and a gooney bird is an albatross]. ** noun INFORMAL 1.a silly, foolish, or eccentric person. 2.NORTH AMERICAN - a bully or thug not bad as a limerick and humour! but i'd delete the 2nd comma i often crawl, usually to women & ice cream, bri (:

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Khairul Ahsan 14 January 2019

Ha ha ha, want just to have a sunny laugh like that, and 'crawl on all four' for a while. This is long overdue to me too! Enjoyed your limerick fully, Valsa. Well done!

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M Asim Nehal 13 January 2019

Fantastic one, ha ha ha...liked it.10

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Savita Tyagi 12 January 2019

Hahaha! A little admonition from teacher of sunny laugh. Thanks mam! We will try to be better be better! (I sure can use your advice Valsa) !

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 December 2018

On the auspicious eve of Christmas, I wish you merry Christmas! Stay always happy and blessed dear madam!

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