Limerick- Fear Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- Fear

Rating: 5.0


Scared by his own shadow, in the dark
He sat, with his face turned back.
Behind him he heard a hiss
That made him to piss
Alas! Nothing but a mouse he could mark!

Limerick- Fear
Tuesday, June 27, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: fear
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 27 June 2017

Great fun though there is fear. Very often rats create scare in night.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 June 2017

Great fun though there is fear. Very often rats create scare in night. Beautiful presentation. Enjoyed with photo provideded. Thanks...10

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Loke Kok Yee 29 June 2017

Ho! Ho! , Can always depend on you to make the day a little lighter. Thanks Valsa.

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Richard Wlodarski 29 June 2017

Both the limerick and the graphic are hilarious. I'll be laughing throughout the Canada Day 150 celebrations. I'll need some levity after public presentations of my poem Cheers Canada 150 +. Thank you, Valsa.

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Simone Inez Harriman 02 July 2017

It's funny how when alone in the dark every sound is very audible and it does make one alert. I would be jumping at every sound especially after watching a horror movie alone late at night.

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Akhtar Jawad 25 April 2018

Fear plays very funny roles sometimes, enjoyed the fun in the Limerick.

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Kostas Lagos 18 March 2018

Ha ha ha! I can't even write a comment about this! A mouse! A mouse! Ho ho ho!

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M Asim Nehal 01 January 2018

Ha ha ha..... So true, Jo darr gaya woh mar gaya...

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Rajnish Manga 12 July 2017

Wonderful imagery coupled with an equally hilarious graphic gives the reader a full dose of fun and laughter. Thanks a lot.

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Mj Lemon 11 July 2017

Great fun, Valsa! ! And anyone who could fear a shadow in the dark....that person will live in companionship with fear!

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