Limerick- In Queue Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- In Queue

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With matchless grace and eyes of crystal blue
She was indeed an angel to view
To win her fervent love
And make her their dove
Men vied with each other standing in queue

Limerick- In Queue
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Loke Kok Yee 15 May 2017

When I first saw her I knew This was a prize to pursue But I had to stand in line My chances quickly declined For I was way back in the queue Thanks for the fun Valsa, you are the best! -10

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Valsa George 16 May 2017

Oh... this is terrific....! Better than my limerick...... Loke Don’t think that your chances are dim Who knows you won’t be made to swim In a joy never dreamt As she gives you her consent To be your soul mate, crushing others’ whim

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Rajnish Manga 08 May 2017

'Men vied with each other standing in queue'. Wherever she goes the situation will remain the same. Great humour and a great limerick to which you have given a new lease. Thanks.

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A poem as graceful as the matchlessly beautiful character. The greatness of Valsa George is vivid in the creation of characters who are very great

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Geetha Jayakumar 25 May 2017

Interesting Limerick flowing in beauty. Loved it.

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Edward Kofi Louis 18 May 2017

To win her fervent love. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 19 May 2017

Thanks for reading Edward!

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Tom Billsborough 16 May 2017

I wouldn't mind standing in her queue. I won't attempt a Limerick. I'll leave that to you and Wes and this budding talent, Loke. We British are supposed to be polite in queues but I'd make an exception in her case. I'll practise my barging techniques just in case. Lovely Limerick, Valsa.

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Valsa George 16 May 2017

Tom, so you are ready to overstep all accepted norms to win her.............! No wonder.... this was 'the face that launched a thousand ships'! Enjoyed your humorous comment! Thanks!

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A thing of beauty demands attention.

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