Limerick- Keen Observation Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- Keen Observation

Rating: 4.8


My neighbor's little son is so smart
In a write up on Grandparents, he wrote
"They never seem to hurry,
Any time, can tell a story
Before sleep, they take their teeth and gums out"

Limerick- Keen Observation
Tuesday, July 24, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: grandparents,limerick,observation
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Lamar Cole 24 July 2018

This is a very humorous write.

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Valsa George 24 July 2018

Thank you so much Lamar.... Glad you found this humorous...!

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 24 July 2018

Yes, children are great observers. Mostly they wouldn't comment but question inside. Adults need to observe care about many things do before children. Thanks for sharing.

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Valsa George 24 July 2018

Quite true.....! Children observe so much, though they won't tell it out! Thank you sir!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 24 July 2018

Wow! An amazing little poem! Enjoyed the humor! Thanks dear madam for sharing......10

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Mihaela Pirjol 15 November 2018

This really put a smile on my face! Smart and humorous! Love it!

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Bri Edwards 27 August 2018

well, my friend, i like the story, and the kid's willingness to 'share' his grandparents' lives with his classmates, but..... how YOUNG would a kid be if s/he really thought (real) gums and teeth were removed? [esp. gums] and i think your treatment as a limerick is below par, especially for you! you must need me to give you some remedial lessons. when are you available? ? bri ;)

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Khairul Ahsan 07 August 2018

Children observe things more keenly than we elders do. Their comments and stories are sometimes so amusing! The picture too is so funny! I liked it. 'No one can withstand the ravages of time! - So well said, I quoted the words from your reply to one of the readers' comments.

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Red Soul 06 August 2018

This is a really wonderful limerick ma'am. Children say the stupidest thing, but boy oh boy, if anything else is more beautiful than those brats at work! Thanks for sharing this: -)

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Savita Tyagi 02 August 2018

So full of laughter in its innocence. You gave voice to those sweet little observations of children.

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