Limerick- Last Ride Together Poem by Valsa George

This poem surely serves its purpose.Well written.

Valsa, such a poweful limerick....10+++++

The format of limerick is a cute and lovable one...it's quite nice that you've chosen to write unhappy subject too in this format....of course this limerick is touching

How sad to see him end this way A mistake made; a life to pay Too late now for him to learn But for others; a lesson stern Big bikes and pride will bring dismay Thanks Valsa

Unfortunate fellow! A nice, message bearing Limerick 10+

The last line delivers a massive jolt. I remember an old campaign from years ago. It served an entirely different purpose....Speed Kills. The words apply here. A touching work, Valsa.

Limericks are not necessarily funny poems, it's sad and touching.

Beautiful Limerick with tragic end. Very true said over-speeding thrills but it kills.

whoa! valsa. before i read your note i thought, that ended with a thunk. i myself know of a death and people who have sustained serious injuries in motorcycle accidents. i've never wanted one and would have done all i could to prevent my sons riding them. imagine how vulnerable you are going at high speed and having a collision! -glen