Limerick- My Cat Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- My Cat

Rating: 5.0


I have a cat with fur as soft as silk
She always has an eye on my milk
A cutie, I love so much
Sometimes, she acts like a witch
Then I cannot but give her a hard kick!

Limerick- My Cat
Friday, November 20, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: cat,milk
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
10 syllables each in lines 1,2 and 5
7 syllables each in lines 3 and 4
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Suresh Kumar Ek 28 November 2020

Sometimes our favourite pets Turns out to be a witch True for human beings also But dont kick Fine limeric

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A cute Limerick. You have a keen sense of observation dear poetess. What you wrote about cats is true. We love and caress our pet cat. Sometimes we become angry and give it a kick. An interesting Limerick.5 stars

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 22 November 2020

WE also deserve a hard stitch as you leave us in the distance cats even can't reach the fast speed at which you all have risen reminds me a cat has 9 lives great catsy poemy ms

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Kostas Lagos 21 November 2020

Do not kick the cat! Hahaha! Fine limerick

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Rajnish Manga 21 November 2020

Even though the last line is diverging (a hard kick) from rest of the poem, I love this beautiful limerick. Truly, cats are the adorable cuties. Thanks, Valsa ji.

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Kesav Easwaran 23 December 2020

Enjoyed your limerick piece. To write a limerick one must have good sense of humor. You seem to have enough. Full rating

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Glen Kappy 17 December 2020

Writing limericks with my granddaughter I experienced how addictive they are. To get her started I wrote this one about her cat— She has a black kitten named Rocket who’s now much too big for her pocket. By the large kitty door he’s felled six birdies or more till she figured a way she could block it. As it turned out, she wrote two that day, and I wrote to more. What fun! Be well and blessed, Valsa. Glen

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Bernard F. Asuncion 04 December 2020

A well penned poem...... Truly fantastic.....5 stars *****

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Mahtab Bangalee 03 December 2020

so no share any milk instead of this do kick hungry cat won't be mad drink, you can fully drink!

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Me Poet Yeps Poet 29 November 2020

TOP POETESS.... in the west PETS ARE LIKE CHILDREN SO... YOU CAN KNOW MORE ABOUT LIFE IF YOU READ MY LATEST ONE MOST READ A TRIBUTE TO FLASHY MY LOVELIEST PET

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