Limerick- On The Point Of A Knife Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- On The Point Of A Knife

Rating: 5.0


They decided to begin a new life,
After years of deep love, as man and wife
But after a drunken night
They had a terrible fight
And the wedlock was cut with a sharp knife!

Limerick- On The Point Of A Knife
Tuesday, July 30, 2019
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick,love,separation
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Ten syllables each in lines 1,2 and 5. Also seven syllables in lines 3 and 4
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mahtab Bangalee 30 July 2019

drunkard life stands as the sharp knife between husband and wife!

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Kostas Lagos 31 July 2019

Poem with sharp humor Valsa!

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 July 2019

But after a drunken night/They had a terrible fight........I can imagine the situation! An amazing Limerick dear madam...........................10++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

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Jane Campion 31 July 2019

A cutting last line.

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sekharan Pookkat 31 July 2019

Life crossed wisdom And knife ended their life

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Aniruddha Pathak 12 September 2019

A limerick with all the colours, good satire, but the picture accompanying does not look as if they are fighting, to me.

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The limerick on love, life, marriage and separation has satirically been handled

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Jane Campion 05 August 2019

A true limerick where the spice of life is spliced.

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Mj Lemon 04 August 2019

Amusing and terrifying! Valsa, this is a perfect blend of comedy and terror. This goes to myfavourites.

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Savita Tyagi 03 August 2019

Sharp, amusing and still full of wisdom! Reckless behavior has consequences!

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