On drinking a bottle of chilled beer
He joked spreading a lot of cheer
Had he stopped with it
His day would have been lit
But quaffing more, he began to act queer!
Hahaha when one is young! Wish you a happy new year filled with more of your great limericks.
Oh my god, he has surely added power plus! Enjoyed the humour! ! New Year Greetings 2018
A wonderful limerick imbued with insight, wisdom and humor. Great advice that we must put to heart. Cleverly written. Five Stars! ! !
He began to act! What an amazing Limerick this is really. We get unlimited fun reading this humorous poem.This expresses brilliance. Thank you very much for sharing this poem with us.10
Lovely limerick loaded with lessons.Many die daily because of drinking. Thanks for sharing this thoughtful message Valsa!
Good advice - be within limits, the day will be lit! I have seen the effects of excess on some of my close friends!
Excellent message for the new year. Drinking is a habit that can ruin a life. An apt and beautiful Limerick that conveys a strong message with a dose of humour. Loved the Limerick Valsa, and the photo too.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
A very very Happy New Year to you and your family, the lime rick has great message of moderation, it's beautiful.
Enjoyed the humor in your splitting of the word limerick into 'lime-rick'. Lime is a good ingredient in all types of cocktail! Thank you Akhtar ji!