Limerick- Over Doing Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- Over Doing

Rating: 5.0


On drinking a bottle of chilled beer
He joked spreading a lot of cheer
Had he stopped with it
His day would have been lit
But quaffing more, he began to act queer!

Limerick- Over Doing
Sunday, December 31, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: celebration,drunkenness
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
New Year is welcomed with drinking and merry making! But moderation is a principle we have to follow in life!
Wish my PH friends a Blessed New Year!
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 02 January 2018

A very very Happy New Year to you and your family, the lime rick has great message of moderation, it's beautiful.

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Valsa George 03 January 2018

Enjoyed the humor in your splitting of the word limerick into 'lime-rick'. Lime is a good ingredient in all types of cocktail! Thank you Akhtar ji!

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Savita Tyagi 02 January 2018

Hahaha when one is young! Wish you a happy new year filled with more of your great limericks.

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Dr Dillip K Swain 31 December 2017

Oh my god, he has surely added power plus! Enjoyed the humour! ! New Year Greetings 2018

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Rini Shibu 01 January 2018

Haha nice humorous lines.. Enjoyed Happy new year

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Rose Marie Juan-austin 28 September 2020

A wonderful limerick imbued with insight, wisdom and humor. Great advice that we must put to heart. Cleverly written. Five Stars! ! !

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Kumarmani Mahakul 14 January 2019

He began to act! What an amazing Limerick this is really. We get unlimited fun reading this humorous poem.This expresses brilliance. Thank you very much for sharing this poem with us.10

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Lovely limerick loaded with lessons.Many die daily because of drinking. Thanks for sharing this thoughtful message Valsa!

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Narayana Aghalaya 27 March 2018

Good advice - be within limits, the day will be lit! I have seen the effects of excess on some of my close friends!

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 12 January 2018

Excellent message for the new year. Drinking is a habit that can ruin a life. An apt and beautiful Limerick that conveys a strong message with a dose of humour. Loved the Limerick Valsa, and the photo too.

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