Limerick- R.I. P Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- R.I. P

Rating: 5.0


There was a naughty boy named Mike
Who always rode on a bike
He would dart off in speed
On it, he was a steed
Sad, he broke his crown on applying brake!

Limerick- R.I. P
Monday, April 10, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: accident
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Akhtar Jawad 10 April 2017

Over speeding is always dangerous, nowadays single wheeling also causes accidents.

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Spock The Vegan 10 April 2017

Sad indeed, if real news. I have some new poems about real news.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 April 2017

Poor Mike...it is relief he is safe.

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Geetha Jayakumar 12 April 2017

Interesting Limerick.I just wonder he is not tagged as R.I.P.

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Nosheen Irfan 13 April 2017

Always a great pleasure to read your limericks that tell an ordinary incident from life in a captivating n humorous way. A10

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Soran M. H 30 August 2020

He would dart off in speed On it, he was a steed Sad, he broke his crown on applying brake!

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Soran M. H 30 August 2020

thank you for your humour Limerick and also the image has conveyed the text, but on the other hand there is a proverb some where saying: falling end up with the stronger standing.. well done Valsa. I congratulate you for your new rank: 216 on top 500 poets,10++

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Narayana Aghalaya 27 March 2018

apt photograph; lovely limerick.

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Loke Kok Yee 21 May 2017

Recently we had more than a dozen mowed down while monkeying on the highway at 3am in the morning. A number of them died but it is still going on. they never learn. Thanks Valsa-10

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Kumarmani Mahakul 19 April 2017

Mike rode the bike and on applying break he fell down. Wonderful, humorous and funny Limerick you have shared that gives real joy to readers....10

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