He saw a girl who in looks was so sweet
Behind, on her buttocks gave her a pat
She turned with a frown
And knocked him down
Now immobile with his leg in a cast
The entire scene is hugely entertaining, Nicely captured in words. Thanks a lot, Valsa ji.
Watch out, men with bad intentions! Funny one, Valsa. Like the pucture.
It reminds me of Jack fell down and broke his crown....
I am so Cheering! ! ! In fact, Hit him again! ! ! I really really dislike men who put their hands on a female without permission. I also dislike intensely men who make sexual comments to a woman without having been encouraged to do so and in fact having been discouraged from doing so. These men do not respond to hints but they do to a 2X4. I approve mightily of this limerick, Valsa! 10++++++++
i thought lines 1,2, and 5 were supposed to rhyme. hmm? but screw it! i like the poem. i like Akhtar's comment. to MyPoemList. some women are so selfish! ! ! she better not come to his bedside; he has a free hand! on the other hand, he had better not do more patting; she may break an arm (his) next time. bri ;) Valsa-the-comedienne strikes again!
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
a good poem to read!