Limerick- Tit For Tat Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- Tit For Tat

Rating: 4.9


He saw a girl who in looks was so sweet
Behind, on her buttocks gave her a pat
She turned with a frown
And knocked him down
Now immobile with his leg in a cast

Limerick- Tit For Tat
Thursday, June 8, 2017
Topic(s) of this poem: bullying
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Pritam Bhowmick 09 June 2017

a good poem to read!

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Rajnish Manga 09 June 2017

The entire scene is hugely entertaining, Nicely captured in words. Thanks a lot, Valsa ji.

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Laurie Van Der Hart 09 June 2017

Watch out, men with bad intentions! Funny one, Valsa. Like the pucture.

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Akhtar Jawad 10 June 2017

I am sorry for both, keeping reasons reserved enjoyed the poem.

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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 11 June 2017

It reminds me of Jack fell down and broke his crown....

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Narayana Aghalaya 27 March 2018

He tried a dangerous thing and paid for it.

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Loke Kok Yee 25 June 2017

1 for the gals,0 for the guys! thanks Valsa.

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Susan Williams 21 June 2017

I am so Cheering! ! ! In fact, Hit him again! ! ! I really really dislike men who put their hands on a female without permission. I also dislike intensely men who make sexual comments to a woman without having been encouraged to do so and in fact having been discouraged from doing so. These men do not respond to hints but they do to a 2X4. I approve mightily of this limerick, Valsa! 10++++++++

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Bri Edwards 17 June 2017

i thought lines 1,2, and 5 were supposed to rhyme. hmm? but screw it! i like the poem. i like Akhtar's comment. to MyPoemList. some women are so selfish! ! ! she better not come to his bedside; he has a free hand! on the other hand, he had better not do more patting; she may break an arm (his) next time. bri ;) Valsa-the-comedienne strikes again!

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Funny, enjoyed reading the poem.

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