Valsa George


Limerick- Tit For Tat - Poem by Valsa George

He saw a girl who in looks was so sweet
Behind, on her buttocks gave her a pat
She turned with a frown
And knocked him down
Now immobile with his leg in a cast

Topic(s) of this poem: bullying


Comments about Limerick- Tit For Tat by Valsa George

  • Narayana AghalayaNarayana Aghalaya (3/27/2018 5:37:00 AM)

    He tried a dangerous thing and paid for it. (Report)Reply

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  • Loke Kok Yee (6/25/2017 10:10:00 AM)

    1 for the gals,0 for the guys! thanks Valsa. (Report)Reply

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  • Susan WilliamsSusan Williams (6/21/2017 3:59:00 PM)

    I am so Cheering! ! ! In fact, Hit him again! ! ! I really really dislike men who put their hands on a female without permission. I also dislike intensely men who make sexual comments to a woman without having been encouraged to do so and in fact having been discouraged from doing so. These men do not respond to hints but they do to a 2X4. I approve mightily of this limerick, Valsa! 10++++++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Bri EdwardsBri Edwards (6/17/2017 10:25:00 PM)

    i thought lines 1,2, and 5 were supposed to rhyme. hmm? but screw it! i like the poem. i like Akhtar's comment.

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    some women are so selfish! ! ! she better not come to his bedside; he has a free hand!
    on the other hand, he had better not do more patting; she may break an arm (his) next time.

    bri ;)

    Valsa-the-comedienne strikes again!
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  • Akham Nilabirdhwaja SinghAkham Nilabirdhwaja Singh (6/16/2017 10:20:00 AM)

    Funny, enjoyed reading the poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Simone Inez Harriman (6/13/2017 2:13:00 AM)

    LOL...A little lesson to not invade someones personal space in such an inappropriate way and to never underestimate a persons ability to defend themselves.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Nosheen IrfanNosheen Irfan (6/12/2017 4:38:00 AM)

    Wowww. That's a befitting revenge. lol (Report)Reply

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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (6/12/2017 3:33:00 AM)

    The title tit for tat in this Limerick amazes mind of readers. She turned with a frown and knocked him down. Amazing expression of this poem motivate mind giving fun and humor. Interesting sharing is done here really.10 (Report)Reply

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  • Tirupathi ChandrupatlaTirupathi Chandrupatla (6/11/2017 6:31:00 AM)

    It reminds me of Jack fell down and broke his crown.... (Report)Reply

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  • Akhtar JawadAkhtar Jawad (6/10/2017 12:40:00 PM)

    I am sorry for both, keeping reasons reserved enjoyed the poem. (Report)Reply

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  • Laurie Van Der HartLaurie Van Der Hart (6/9/2017 3:11:00 AM)

    Watch out, men with bad intentions! Funny one, Valsa. Like the pucture. (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (6/9/2017 1:23:00 AM)

    The entire scene is hugely entertaining, Nicely captured in words. Thanks a lot, Valsa ji. (Report)Reply

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  • Pritam BhowmickPritam Bhowmick (6/9/2017 12:32:00 AM)

    a good poem to read! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Thursday, June 8, 2017

Poem Edited: Friday, June 9, 2017


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