Limerick- Thus Ended Their Dating Poem by Valsa George

Limerick- Thus Ended Their Dating

Rating: 4.7

Two lovers secretly planned on a ‘date'
They agreed to meet at dead of the night
Into darkness, as they stole
Fell into a deep manhole
There they stayed all night packed so tight!

Sunday, September 2, 2018
Topic(s) of this poem: limerick,love,accident
Vaidyanathan Ram Iyer Channel 05 September 2018

Beautiful limerick, packed so tight.

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Geeta Radhakrishna Menon 05 September 2018

Thank you for this delightful Limerick on Lovers, Valsa. The lovers are so immersed in each other, they are hardly aware of their surroundings. They can only see each other. :) ................ 10

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Dr Dillip K Swain 06 September 2018

A wonderful Limerick dear madam! Enjoyed the humor.....thanks for sharing.....10

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Geetha Jayakumar 06 September 2018

Interesting Limerick Valsa.. There couldn't have been better place to be in. Enjoyed reading it.

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S.zaynab Kamoonpuri 10 September 2018

Wow didn't know u could write limericks so well, wow this perfect funtastic poem shows u can write anything well. Super cool imaginative romance here lol grinning from ear to ear. Kudos.

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Mj Lemon 24 January 2019

For some, the ideal 'date'. The humour really comes through, Valsa. Very much appreciated.

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Rajnish Manga 29 November 2018

I haven't seen a funnier limerick about the pleasures of being in the 'underworld'. Thanks, Valsa ji.

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Aniruddha Pathak 16 November 2018

A limerick that says all limericks are not slap-stick, an enjoyable goodly read. And I notice two things; one, we both use limericks in different ways. Second, I too started writing poems only after 2000. Till then, ever since my Times of India days, I wrote serious non-fiction and the analytical stuff thru articles for Economic Times and other publications. But nothing can beat poetry.

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Narayana Aghalaya 13 November 2018

It was as if they had deliberately planned their date inside a dark manhole, away from the prying eyes of curious cats! You have transformed a mere manhole to a romantic rendezvous.Lovely limerick!

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Kim Barney 06 November 2018

This made me chuckle! A pleasure to read. Thanks, Valsa, for posting this.

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