Looking up to the sky at night,
Why are there no stars shining bright?
Many times I have looked up for any stars light,
Just to see total darkness and no stars that shine white.
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beautiful poem... nicely set i like the united rithm of all the poem, hard to keep it but you managed to do it, thanks for sharing
I'm glad I read this. Your poem really made me think about life. && it was enjoyable to read. It really is an amazing poem.
I love all your poems. A lot of them are really truthful. I absolutely love them! ! keep writing.
Good write! ! ! ! i have always loved the stars sinse I wax little!
Thanks for your comments about my poetry, I'm glad they uplifted you a little, you are right though, I can and have written much more.... I will post some more soon. No sorry my songs arn't for sale in a store.... I may go back into it one day though, when I'm feeling confident enough... I have read yours and they flow quite well... Keep it up.
wowwww glad I chanced on you nice rhythmic style....... a nice sing song way good write Arthur
Love it..It realle makes you think and you found the perfect words to rhyme with others, wich makes it a perfect poem
no doubt this version has its right to exist and the poem is mysterious
All of your poems are intriguing. His wonders are really something to sit and think about huh? Good job!
great poem i always did like stars... great piece of work
I love of the rhyme.......like a song that dances......beautifully.yeahhh the stars not always bright! ! ! good job Arthur.
very nice piece. i like your style, its very unique, and interesting to read =]
What a pleasure your poetry is. You certainly have a God given gift :) Brilliant structure 10/10 again
That was interesting, Arthur, how you put your words together in this way. Not easy to do. You have a very unique style. Best Wishes, Marilyn
RIGHT ON. ;) wow I cannot beleive how many times you were able to ryme the same sounding words, incredible! I could never pull somthing like that off.
I gave this a nine because some things aren't right So it's best to never speak of them and definitely do not write. GW62
The poem is great and you are great in rhyming. God bless you! With warmest wishes, Larisa