Thursday, January 2, 2003

Looking Up To The Sky At Night Comments

Rating: 4.9

Looking up to the sky at night,
Why are there no stars shining bright?
Many times I have looked up for any stars light,
Just to see total darkness and no stars that shine white.
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Arthur Knackmus
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Larisa Rzhepishevska 25 April 2010

The poem is great and you are great in rhyming. God bless you! With warmest wishes, Larisa

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Whispering Rose 18 April 2010

beautiful poem... nicely set i like the united rithm of all the poem, hard to keep it but you managed to do it, thanks for sharing

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Angela Shields-Wells 17 April 2010

I'm glad I read this. Your poem really made me think about life. && it was enjoyable to read. It really is an amazing poem.

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BrittanyXD S 16 March 2010

I love all your poems. A lot of them are really truthful. I absolutely love them! ! keep writing.

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Leanne Guyton 05 March 2010

Enjoyable and true a nice reed

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Darlene Styles 11 February 2010

Good write! ! ! ! i have always loved the stars sinse I wax little!

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Catherine Harrington 09 February 2010

Thanks for your comments about my poetry, I'm glad they uplifted you a little, you are right though, I can and have written much more.... I will post some more soon. No sorry my songs arn't for sale in a store.... I may go back into it one day though, when I'm feeling confident enough... I have read yours and they flow quite well... Keep it up.

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Anjali Sinha 21 January 2010

wowwww glad I chanced on you nice rhythmic style....... a nice sing song way good write Arthur

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Katellyne Baker 17 January 2010

Love it..It realle makes you think and you found the perfect words to rhyme with others, wich makes it a perfect poem

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Emma Adamyan 04 October 2009

no doubt this version has its right to exist and the poem is mysterious

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Brittney Abrams 01 June 2009

again. job well done. very soulful. it makes me think...

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Kristen Brewster 09 March 2009

All of your poems are intriguing. His wonders are really something to sit and think about huh? Good job!

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great poem i always did like stars... great piece of work

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 13 November 2008

I love of the rhyme.......like a song that dances......beautifully.yeahhh the stars not always bright! ! ! good job Arthur.

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Sydney Love 13 November 2008

very nice piece. i like your style, its very unique, and interesting to read =]

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Tia Maria 13 November 2008

What a pleasure your poetry is. You certainly have a God given gift :) Brilliant structure 10/10 again

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Marilyn Lott 13 November 2008

That was interesting, Arthur, how you put your words together in this way. Not easy to do. You have a very unique style. Best Wishes, Marilyn

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Mary Murphy 10 November 2008

RIGHT ON. ;) wow I cannot beleive how many times you were able to ryme the same sounding words, incredible! I could never pull somthing like that off.

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Greenwolfe 1962 11 September 2008

I gave this a nine because some things aren't right So it's best to never speak of them and definitely do not write. GW62

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Linda Weischedel 25 January 2008

Fabulous poem! ! I give this write a 10 for sure! !

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Arthur Knackmus

Arthur Knackmus

Olney Illinois U.S.A.
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