Tuesday, September 15, 2009

Lost Soul Comments

Rating: 4.8

After light, there's dark,
After dark, there's death,
After death, there's life,
For a soul to walk the night.
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Anna Andrews
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Anna Andrews 28 January 2018

Thank you everyone for your kind words, advice & pointing out mistakes. I'm honoured to receive your reviews & happy you enjoyed this poem.

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Anil Kumar Panda 28 January 2018

Such a beautiful poem! ! Touching. Can't avoid cycle of death and life till nirvana is achieved. Thanks for sharing.

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Siddartha Montik 28 January 2018

Nice poem.. with so much embedded Philosophy. Thank you for sharing Poet! 10++!

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Rajnish Manga 28 January 2018

Sweetly told but with a melancholic tone. This is really very sad- 'As the heart will never heal again'.

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Henry Tong 28 January 2018

Wow! I love the way you control the outpour of your emotions and transform them into delicate words.A little recommendation: the last line sounds a bit unfit...

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tom billsborough 27 January 2018

lovely rhythm and content but there is a typo on the last line.. dropp and in line 8 you have a singular noun heart with a plural verb bruise.

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Lyn Paul 27 January 2018

Thought provoking and beautifully expressed with a title that captures your soul to want to read.

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Savita Tyagi 27 January 2018

Beautifully composed. The soft poetic images that spills with each word. Congratulations and thanks or sharing.

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Jayatissa K.Liyanage 27 January 2018

True nature of life; sadness behind every happiness! Very poignantly written, philosophical poem. X+. Thanksfor sharing.

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Subhas Chandra Chakra 27 January 2018

The cycle of life and death continues with the walk of the soul, be it through the night or through the day. The soul may walk a thousand miles through the day or wait patiently during the night. A superb theme to work upon. A nice poem. 10 for the poem shared and congrats on being picked as POD.

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Tom Allport 27 January 2018

a searching poem of endless woes? .............well written Anna

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James Mclain 27 January 2018

Ann, congratulations on your poem of the day.. James McLain

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Sylvia Frances Chan 27 January 2018

Indeed a LOST SOUL so true! The words in this poem point out where he will go. Wondrous write! Thank you for sharing this fantastic idea. A TEN for Member Poem of The DAY! ! the vote and much-much more!

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Grace Svensson 27 January 2018

a poem that make us think the true value of life, its cycle, it's essence.

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Tom Allport 27 January 2018

a poem of freedom to roam yet always searching for a new home? ................well penned Anna.

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Bernard F. Asuncion 27 January 2018

Anna, such a well-penned poem..10+++

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Haoran T 27 January 2018

Such a touching poem. The cycle of life and death which embraces the eternal sorrow...We get lost thru our soul, and forget what we remember...

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Rakesh Bedi 15 September 2009

Poignant in the true sense, anna....!

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Obinna Eruchie 15 September 2009

How lost he will remain, wandering the face of the earth. Touching.

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