Akhtar Jawad

Gold Star - 105,835 Points (8-2-1945 / Gorakhpur)

Love And Art - Poem by Akhtar Jawad

When your love is returned with love,
there's no story.
When your love isn't returned,
a story starts.
You are sad,
you are feeling pains,
you are crying,
your heart is on fire,
and the fire then becomes a source of light,
light that inspires you to express your pains,
your feelings and emotions.
The artist then paints his best painting,
the musician composes his lovely tune,
the singer sings his best song,
and the poet writes a poem,
a work of art!

Topic(s) of this poem: love and art


Comments about Love And Art by Akhtar Jawad

  • Wes Vogler (11/26/2015 8:26:00 AM)


    When my lover is displeased there is no such thing as art. If mama ain't happy ain't nobody happy. And yet she
    allows the illusion that I lead in all things. This is called a marriage. Nicely written ta
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  • (11/26/2015 2:22:00 AM)


    A remarkable poem. You've really tapped into what moves and motivates the forces of creativity. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/23/2015 6:58:00 AM)


    Love is returned with love in interesting story and beautiful poem drafted well with interesting mind. Nicely penned love poem...10 (Report) Reply

  • Mohammed Asim Nehal (11/22/2015 11:36:00 AM)


    Ultimately what u get in return is important and always matter. A thought provoking poem on love. (Report) Reply

  • (11/21/2015 12:53:00 AM)


    Those who have known hunger appreciates food better
    thanks -10
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  • Kelly Kurt (11/20/2015 11:54:00 PM)


    I too find that pain at least slightly trumps other emotions as the one that spawns greater creativity (Report) Reply

  • (11/20/2015 8:58:00 PM)


    What a pest
    that in suffering
    is our best.
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Poem Submitted: Friday, November 20, 2015



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