Love Donation Day Poem by yoonoos peerbocus

Love Donation Day

Rating: 4.5


Smoke silvery as guided missiles
spirals sun ward
from flawed flue of power flu
smudges rat grey
the dove cooing olive grove
soots as coal war sky's blear-all black
causing black out to the mind
of those in high position.too late
and too dim their insight comes
when dust of dinghy atoms
pulp innocent flesh
fanning a hurricane of fire.
pain shrieks from the scalded
the great agony of lack-
of something human
and peace of understanding
to summit a world's love donation day
for a love alliance of human race
to avert such fear fully.

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Raymond Farrell 07 May 2018

Your poem is very relevant today especially when we look at the state of the MIdde East.

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Anu Soneye 07 May 2018

This is a wonderful poem

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Claude H Oliver Ii 07 May 2018

Every day a love donation day, yes. Love: the only medicine for fear.

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Houda Boukassoula 11 May 2018

the great agony of lack- of something human That's what's nowadays universe is suffering from.Very nice write

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Lungelo S Mbuyazi 13 May 2018

Brilliantly articulated.... simply loved reading it...It leaves a reader with another dimensional wiew of love, hatred and peace

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pain shrieks from the scalded the great agony of lack- of something human and peace of understanding to summit a world's love donation day The necessity of achieving what we lack is badly felt...10

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Queeny Gona 31 December 2019

lack of understanding and lack of humanity doesn't yield successful love donation!

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Robert Plese 29 December 2019

You're right, I do like this poem. It is quite interesting and has a mysterious undertone of statements that are being made. I can admit it don't fully grasp its intent, but do recognize it is intended.

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Anjandev Roy 13 August 2019

to avert such fear fully........lovely. Thank u, dear poet. anjandev roy.

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Prabir Gayen 15 February 2019

pain shrieks from the scalded the great agony of lack- of something human and peace of understanding....beautiful thought

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