Love's Abracadabra Poem by Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh

Love's Abracadabra



I have spelled out love's abracadabra
To take the gem from head of a cobra
I am playing the pipe to make her dance
I am dancing with her in wild romance
I have broken her fang to tame her now
She has become as good as a pet cow
I have touched her head with my magic wand
In order to make real my sweet dreamland
Thus I have turned her into a woman
Now she has become my favorite fan

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Red O'mara 24 November 2012

'She has become as good as a pet cow'. I'm sure that's a line that works beautifuly in Bangladesh, Asif. I must try it out in Melbourne. Very Immaginative. Keep up the goodwork

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Jerry Hughes 24 November 2012

excellent Asif, keep it up. Cheers Jerry

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Sallam Yassin 24 November 2012

U have the magic man u have the soul-gan so u are the king man

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So Close 24 November 2012

superb! ! the last lines are really wonderful...keep on writing »so close«

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Wahab Abdul 24 November 2012

i am in agreement with dr. sayed this is good fr child...

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Mark Nyamekye Boadi 26 November 2012

Woooo I love it. Nice and deep poem

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Vivek Tiwari 25 November 2012

Wow! How well on the wings of imagination! I wish you get your love like a Love.

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isam Abdelrahman 25 November 2012

It is a good piece of poem. surprised coz abracadabra is a Jewish religious charm to heal Malaria as mentioned in encyclopedias !

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Peter Maxharya 25 November 2012

Talk of creative writing this one really good the imagery of the lover(magician) the deadly snake pet being tamed. The persona must be very loving.

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Unwritten Soul 25 November 2012

Really a wonderful poetry, it really unique you know..i am sorry for late respond as i told you before, i am not much reading lately...blurry eyes, headache, mind wandering, and time less in hand, but i managed to get some read of your poem..i know you always doing a very nice poem like always..like this one_Soul

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Asif Andalib

Asif Andalib

Moez Monzil, Komlapur, Faridpur, Bangladesh
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