Love's Fortune Poem by GREENWOLFE 1962

Love's Fortune

Rating: 4.5

I was merry not, in two was I,
And round the clock I wondered why.
So free I did what man should do,
Forget the bitch and start anew.

You know of this how boughs can break
How rivers run, how worlds can shake.
And as you told me to before,
'Goodbye, ' I said, to love once more.

Now free, I thought what life should be,
When came your love to rescue me.
Though lost in love as I was then,
Loves once fulfilled don't yearn again.

With you I make my time and seed,
Fortold by you the love I need.
And that I know, for I can say,
I'm fortune blessed you came my way.

Dee Daffodil 22 July 2008

Wolfey....what an absolutely beautiful poem! ! ! ! I love this one. However...I note that I cannot vote on it... Hgs, Dee

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Coach Roth 21 July 2008

If only we could always count on someone new bringing love, it would make moving on from another so much easier...thoughtful and sometimes snarly write...Coach

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Howard Johnson 21 July 2008

This is amost excelent write GW, I too could not find the vote box, Well deservin' a 10

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i couldnmt find the voting box... so i thought i would leave you a comment... so here it is.. your writing is very engaging and interesting... it makes the reader want to read more... good job

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Original Unknown Girl 17 July 2008

Most lovely poem. HG: -) xx

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Rachel Butler 21 September 2009

With you I make my time and seed, Fortold by you the love I need. Rachel Ann Butler

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Cristy Upshaw 03 June 2009

I am finding writes that are you, but a different side of you. affection well conveyed within you words.

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Rm. Shanmugam Chettiar 21 October 2008

The flow of words are so smooth that the poem sooths the reasers

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Ashraful Musaddeq 13 September 2008

A melodious lovely poem on love. Love is the core desire of human being, a basic need, an art, a spore of art, a dream, a hope, and what not. I love it, it's lyrical flow. Bravo.

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Sw33t Girl 02 September 2008

wow! Such a great piece! I fell in love with it!

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