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My Devotion

Rating: 4.8
If pain were your compassion
And tears the joy I had.
If tormenting me became your life
And my suffering made you glad.

Were hard drugs your slow undoing,
Deceit your calling card.
If your heart was bound in sorrow
And your passions frozen hard.
Were your touch not soft or gentle,
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Rachel Butler 20 September 2009
Were your touch not soft or gentle, Your kiss both cold and blue. Rachel Ann Butler
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Cristy Upshaw 04 June 2009
wow, what a remarkable piece. devotion to one is an underlining word of neverending loyalty through love and respect. your words convey such greatness and move me to sigh with contentment.
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baylei_ slater 19 January 2009
you are really good....im just an amiture......hmmmmmm but i love this poem! ! !
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Brittaney Static 29 September 2008
I really enjoy this poem. You are very clever with words, Greenwolfe.
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BEAU GOLDEN 14 July 2008
I have read the first 20 and certainly do enjoy your body of work thus far, I look forward to reading the rest! ~beau
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Kali Abyss 26 June 2008
This is beautiful =) Realmente hermoso!
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Scooby Doo 24 June 2008
Sounds like some good old fashioned blues to me man. Love it.
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Bianca B. 20 June 2008
your awesome you know that. How old are you again?
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Dean Hope 08 June 2008
good tempo and rhythm good read
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you're devoted to your love ones........and that's pretty awsome GW.cool write.
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