Love's Thesis Comments

great poem and rhyme scheme lovely

Lovely, just as its about love, I love it... It took me towards the paths... As i imagined every picture as its written...

Love is all that we need on this earth. Thanks for sharing this poem with us. E.K.L.

Lots of raw passion so beautifully written, great write! !

Lot of feeling there. Keep up the good work.

Excellently put accross. Well done...

great thesis and wonderful wish, may you get it :)

Give me sweet big fat kiss Write with lips love's thesis You too will feel the bliss I say wow! beautiful verses with awesome rhymes.this is 10.Congrats.

beautiful poem.. Njoyd reading it.

magnificent one and adorable with wonderful rhyme.and also romantically written.really it is a love thesis.and admirable as a thesis.10++ cheers~nb

Your words are fantastic. a great thesis. well done.

Awwwwww this is so heart warming! ! I love it! ! The flow was incredible and well thought out!

good poem and beautifyll also

very nicely written! you did great in getting your poem to rhyme and most of all it didn't seem as if you just wanted it to rhyme because the main idea is easily understood and every line compliments each other... it gives off the determination of the poet to persuade his love.

Simple but powerfully communicates the urgency, the fears, hopes and promise of one seeking love

gud one really enjoyed it....keep writing... »so close«

beautiful write..really enjoyed it

Beautiful poem. Dont play theif and police, it seems to me like 'dont play tom and jerry': -) Nicely written, enjoyed the read.