Love That Shines Poem by Ellen Ni Bheachain

Love That Shines

Rating: 4.4


All that shines,
Spreads rays of light in direction of others,
Just like the Sun's Rays,
Just like the Star's Rays,
Both illuminate light to see,
To see more clearly,
Or, to shed some light on,

And in the eyes of love,
They shine so bright,
No matter what color the eyes are,
Or the type of people they are,
When love shines it shows,

When love that shines,
Is love allowed to be?
For love has no color,
No culture or nation,
When love shines through,

It shows in their eyes,
That love is within them both,
In their eyes they both know,
They are in love,
Shining bright that illuminates them both,
So, others in passing,
See two people in love shining bright,

It simply beams out of each of them,
And shows the light bright in their eyes,
Like Sun with Rays,
Like Stars with Rays,
It reflects in them,
As they beam and glow,

For Love that Shines,
Shows itself,
And illuminates happiness,
That shines so bright,
It creates smiles and laughter,
Song and dance,
Happy memories,
Lasting memories,

When love that shines,
Is love allowed to be?
For love has no color,
No culture or nation,
When love shines through,

For love is chemistry,
That initial spark or twinkle
That when two meets and gets to know,
Getting to know each other and letting love shines through,
That begins the building,
Of that never-ending feeling,
Of just loving each other,
True and unconditional,

It is allowing love to conquer over,
The strife's and woes of life,
Allowing love to shine on,
And standing by each other,
Makes life a better place for all to be,
Love is for everyone,
If we just let it be,

When the love that shines,
Is love allowed to be?
For love has no color,
No culture or nation,
When love shines through.

Love That Shines
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Love is something we are still 2nd rate of showing. There are all the different types of love and we have become so self-guarding in showing it as we all become less assured in showing love.Platonic Love, Caring Love, Sharing Love, Showing Love, Embracing Love, Allowing Love, Fallen in Love, and so, love can shine.E-NíB.
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Patti Masterman 17 May 2020

It is a lovely poem in many dimensions.

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Kim Barney 27 May 2020

Good work, and congrats on poem of the day!

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Bernard F. Asuncion 09 October 2020

A well penned poem. Truly lovely and wonderful...5 stars*****

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Khairul Ahsan 27 May 2020

I wonder if the poet has rightly used the word 'eliminate' in the fifth lines of the first and the fourth stanza, and the third of the sixth. May be, s/he might have meant 'illuminate'. Otherwise, 'eliminate' makes no sense of the sentences it is in. I mean no offense to the poet. I appreciate the theme, it's so nice! Only I emphasize that a 'Poem of the Day' should be free of such gross mistakes. Whoever selected this poem as the 'Poem of the Day' must have a look at it again.

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Good afternoon Mr. Ahsan. Thank you for your feedback although, I feel your wrote it for Admin at Poemhunter and not a comment for me who wrote the poem. I have gone into my page and corrected the word “Eliminate” to “Illuminate”. Sorry if it upset you in such a gross way. I have published a poem today titled: “You Are A Star” and was sure to spell “Illuminate” correctly. You have a good day now.

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Lyn Paul 27 May 2020

A beautiful poem. The world is lacking love. Love is not just romance, it is loving who you are. Every song is about love but it is missing " Love that Shines" Thank you Ellen

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Thank you Lyn. First time.

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Kumarmani Mahakul 27 May 2020

In the eyes of love the beauty shines with greater motivation. Happy memories keep each beauty sequence in mind. Eliminates of happiness gather in core of love with brightness. Love is chemistry and love is art. This poem is very brilliantly penned. A nice poem is chosen as the poem of the day! CONGRATULATIONS!

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Many thanks Kumarmani!

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Edward Kofi Louis 27 May 2020

Eyes of love, peace and joy! ! ! Love that shines! Uplifting righteous morals. Thanks for sharing this poem with us.

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