Lovers' Fantasy Poem by Sandra Feldman

Lovers' Fantasy

Rating: 5.0


Do you love me
With the depth
Of the Oceans
And the word,
Eternally?
Yes, said the Moon
To the Sea,
Every night,
I give you
My light,
My reflection
They being,
The best of me,
Yet no one knows
That this love
That glows
Is our secret
Lovers', fantasy.

Monday, October 19, 2020
Topic(s) of this poem: love,secret
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Kumarmani Mahakul 19 October 2020

Love should be given with depth of ocean. Eternally love carries light and joy. Love gives amazing reflection. This poem is brilliantly penned...5 stars.

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Belle Wassermeister 19 October 2020

You have a gifted imagination, Sandra!

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Bill Cantrell 19 October 2020

How appropriate for a fantasy to be brought to birth through poetry, with the making of a covenant through the reflection of the depth of love’s commitment! This is the kind of poetry that makes you so very special, what an awesome poem! !

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Bernard F. Asuncion 22 October 2020

A well conveyed poem. Truly fantastic and lovely...5 stars*****

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Yiyan Han 20 October 2020

Oh this is a wonderful romantic piece with 5* I'll translate a song by the late famous lady - watch this space hehehe You ask me how deep my love is The moon expresses my feelings

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M Asim Nehal 20 October 2020

What a fantastic fantasy......5*********** Loved it.

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L Milton Hankins 19 October 2020

Nice work, Sandra. I enjoyed reading this well-crafted poem on love between the moon and the oceans. Write more, and thanks for sharing.

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Kostas Lagos 19 October 2020

The sea and the moon. Such a wonderful concept!

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