Lying On My Back… Poem by Kesav Venkat Easwaran
Lying On My Back…
Lying on my back on the late night lawn
I look northwards behold a star shine alone
A sun has come over to please me; frank!
Talking to it in heart i express my thanks…
The star laughs an’ tells me: You foolish man!
Pick out a northerly sun, never one can!
Stop kidding get up an’ go to bed straight
I’ll come down to your dreams if time permits…
Even at that drowsy moment you were able to be poetic...wonderful...a neat poem with a dash of humour...you always excel in the lighter side of life to amuse the reader....thank you
Very descriptive Kesav as you lie on your back and look at the sky. I also enjoyed the humor and hope you had wonderful dreams that night. 10 love Karin
lying on your back and watching the night sky, you travel in a world of magic, transcend the humdrum of daily existence and gain insight through inner reflections and self realization. nothing teaches like nature, as you have expressed in this poem with a touch of humour. human follies and foilbles... 10 Mamta
Imagination at its poetic best Kesav....you make a simple poem on a dream take the reader far away.......
very well written.. your poem can tell in very few words what can't be conveyed in hundreds of words by others and that's poetical triumph.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
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Listen to the lonely stars, they have learnt wisdom by meditations in secluded spheres. Very beautiful poem! 10 even if you don't care!