Cristina Teodor

Rookie - 27 Points (18.11.1973 / Romania)

Magic Lies In Silence Of Grass And In Your Voice - Poem by Cristina Teodor

I am barefoot walking in the grass of morning,
The dew drops are comforting my feet,
I felt relieved by my stress and grief,
When i heard your voice in the grass rustling.

I lie down on grass and i could feel its silence,
I close my eyes and i enjoyed your voice,
The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind,
Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice.

Is amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass,
Opening my eyes i saw above the sky,
There was your face among the clouds smiling,
I had the feeling that i want to hug the sky.

I'm gonna miss you all the days of life,
And even when death will take my last breath,
Last thing i'll do passing to eternity,
I'm gonna miss you.

Winter will come, grass will fall asleep,
I 'll not hear the grass rustling anymore,
Only my memories with you will be always alive,
Rustling in my mind as grass did.


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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (8/4/2019 1:24:00 AM)

    Such tenderness in thoughts and words. True beautifully worded. Melancholy is peeping at its door. I can imagine this poem in the Romanian language, Five stanzas full of suppressed emotions (Report)Reply

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  • Sylvia Frances ChanSylvia Frances Chan (8/4/2019 1:13:00 AM)

    Four years in a row being chosen as The Member Poem Of The Day, very exceptional. CONGRATULATIONS on being chosen as the MPOD on 3 August 2016,3 August 2017,3 August 2018 and 3 August 2019. This poem is immortalized by now by Poem Hunter and Team. I congratulate Poem Hunter and Team for their awareness of Emotive Poetry. Such a true loveliest poem. A 10 Full Score for this sublime poem. (Report)Reply

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  • C Faustino (8/4/2019 1:03:00 AM)

    Love your poem... if we can be buried where grasses can take root in our soul, then we shall live again in the silence of the grass.10+ (Report)Reply

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  • Rajnish MangaRajnish Manga (8/3/2019 11:55:00 PM)

    Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice
    ....amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass.... //.... Magic of the morning walk. Awesome. Congrats.
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  • Mahtab BangaleeMahtab Bangalee (8/3/2019 10:58:00 PM)

    The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind,
    Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice....//// excellent and finest poem; the silence sounds great in the inn of heart of knowledge////
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  • Jez BurlJez Burl (8/3/2019 7:12:00 PM)

    A very magnificent write! Magic lies in silence, yes..For when words are out of sight, silence speaks softly to the heart.Congrats for a well-deserved POD.10++++ (Report)Reply

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  • Poet PoetPoet Poet (8/3/2019 1:06:00 PM)

    CONGRATULATIONS FOR THE SERIOUSLY SILENT POEM EVER WRITTEN HE'D LOVE YOUR DEVOTION I silently Share your loneliness and hope you will have a balance life of silent calmness Eternity is too far to see let him in your heat still forever be SILENTLY HE WILL SPEAK WITH THEE Your silence will vanish like a summers breeze as your voice in smiles shall freeze now kindly read MY LOVELIEST POEM
    MOMS SMILES
    SILENTLY PLEASE
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  • Bharati NayakBharati Nayak (8/3/2019 12:34:00 PM)

    Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice.

    Is amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass,
    Opening my eyes i saw above the sky,
    There was your face among the clouds smiling,
    I had the feeling that i want to hug the sky.
    - - - What a wonderful poem of love .The image of love is found in a tiny blade of grass as well as the sky.It feels as if this feeling of love will continue for eternity.
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  • Kumarmani MahakulKumarmani Mahakul (8/3/2019 12:11:00 PM)

    I lie down on grass and i could feel its silence,
    I close my eyes and i enjoyed your voice,
    The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind,
    Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice......haunting expression. A brilliant poem on love, magic and nature has been astutely delineated. Thanks and congratulations.
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  • Ratnakar Mandlik (8/3/2019 11:43:00 AM)

    A captivating poem giving the feel of the magical silence of nature present on the grass along with dew drops and rustling of the blades of the grass. A well deserved poem of the day. Congratulations. (Report)Reply

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  • Anil Kumar PandaAnil Kumar Panda (8/3/2019 11:29:00 AM)

    A beautiful work on the beauty of nature. Rolling, sitting, walking and playing on grass give a lot of enjoyment.
    Winter will come, grass will fall asleep,
    I 'll not hear the grass rustling anymore,
    Only my memories with you will be always alive,
    Rustling in my mind as grass did... is so nice. Congrats.
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  • Jayatissa K.Liyanage (8/3/2019 10:12:00 AM)

    Nothing is more appropriate than the nature, the wonderful nature to express feelings of love in a human heart. Beautifully written poem. Congrats on your placement. X (Report)Reply

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  • Malabika Ray ChoudhuryMalabika Ray Choudhury (8/3/2019 9:29:00 AM)

    The title says all! Nature and Love get intertwined in a magical moment! Fascinating poetic expression! Congratulations Dear Poet - your poem deserves the honour! (Report)Reply

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  • Bill CantrellBill Cantrell (8/3/2019 8:58:00 AM)

    Oh how nature can connect us to moments of bliss..loved ones..cheerful memories and doorways to the past and future, this poem is absolutely enchanting and I applaud poemhunter for picking it as poem of the day, be proud my friend..a perfect poem! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Bill Cantrell (8/3/2019 8:57:00 AM)

    Oh how nature can connect us to moments of bliss..loved ones..cheerful memories and doorways to the past and future, this poem is absolutely enchanting and I applaud poemhunter for picking it as poem of the day, be proud my friend..a perfect poem! ! ! (Report)Reply

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  • Julia Luber (8/3/2019 7:14:00 AM)

    Kind of above a comment- sets one in the mood for silence, and being enveloped in the grass and somebody's dulcet voice. (Report)Reply

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  • Banamala SenBanamala Sen (8/3/2019 7:10:00 AM)

    Beautiful poetic expression! Lyrical, and spiritual as well!
    Is amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass - feel the same way!
    Congratulations on your poem being chosen as POD!
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  • Aniruddha PathakAniruddha Pathak (8/3/2019 6:39:00 AM)

    I like the way the poems ends,
    'Winter will come, grass will fall asleep,
    I 'll not hear the grass rustling anymore,
    Only my memories with you will be always alive,
    Rustling in my mind as grass did.
    Lovely imagination.
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  • Luis Estable (8/3/2019 4:06:00 AM)

    This is such a good poem that I wish for more space here to do it justice with my critique of it. I say critique but I mean it in a positive way. They can be good, too.
    The language utilized here is quite poetic and much can be said of it.
    Thanks!
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  • Dominic WindramDominic Windram (8/3/2019 2:15:00 AM)

    This poem abounds with powerful imagery...congratulations Cristina! (Report)Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 21, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 22, 2011


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