Cristina Teodor

Rookie - 27 Points (18.11.1973 / Romania)

Magic Lies In Silence Of Grass And In Your Voice - Poem by Cristina Teodor

I am barefoot walking in the grass of morning,
The dew drops are comforting my feet,
I felt relieved by my stress and grief,
When i heard your voice in the grass rustling.

I lie down on grass and i could feel its silence,
I close my eyes and i enjoyed your voice,
The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind,
Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice.

Is amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass,
Opening my eyes i saw above the sky,
There was your face among the clouds smiling,
I had the feeling that i want to hug the sky.

I'm gonna miss you all the days of life,
And even when death will take my last breath,
Last thing i'll do passing to eternity,
I'm gonna miss you.

Winter will come, grass will fall asleep,
I 'll not hear the grass rustling anymore,
Only my memories with you will be always alive,
Rustling in my mind as grass did.


Comments about Magic Lies In Silence Of Grass And In Your Voice by Cristina Teodor

  • Dr.tony Brahmin (8/10/2017 7:09:00 AM)


    When i heard your voice in the grass rustling.
    Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice.
    There was your face among the clouds smiling,
    Only my memories with you will be always alive,
    Rustling in my mind as grass did.
    Love transforms us. Love makes us poets, love helps us to listen..and see a world of beauty in a blade of grass. Bliss, love.. thank you dear poetess. tony
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  • Ena Ena (8/4/2017 12:09:00 AM)


    Excellent composition on Silence Of Grass And In Your Voice, congrats (Report) Reply

  • Bharati Nayak (8/3/2017 11:25:00 PM)


    Is amazing how much miracle stays in a blade of grass,
    Opening my eyes i saw above the sky,
    There was your face among the clouds smiling,
    I had the feeling that i want to hug the sky.
    - - - - - - - - It is amazing indeed how love transforms our life.We feel blissful and can find love in little bit of things around us.A wonderful poem of love, thanks for sharing.Congratulations for Poem of the Day.
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  • Lyn Paul (8/3/2017 6:07:00 PM)


    Beautiful words expressed creating wonder. (Report) Reply

  • Edward Kofi Louis (8/3/2017 2:29:00 PM)


    Barefooted! ! Thanks for sharing this poem with us. (Report) Reply

  • (8/3/2017 11:54:00 AM)


    Beautiful poem! Congratulations on Poet of the Day.. a ten.. (Report) Reply

  • Seamus O' Brian (8/3/2017 11:42:00 AM)


    A poignant write, the rhythmic repetition of imagery continuously reinforcing the theme in every stanza. Congratulations on this poem of the day. (Report) Reply

  • Jayatissa K. Liyanage (8/3/2017 10:20:00 AM)


    Tenderly feeling that ran through veins while reading through the touching poem, kept me wondering as to who parted from whom. Nevertheless, paraphrasing with nature's events and things makes poem sensational. Congrats for being the member's PoD. Thanks for sharing. X (Report) Reply

  • Siddartha Montik (8/3/2017 9:24:00 AM)


    Good write! Touching and deep! TY! 10+++ and congrats for Poem of the DAY! m (Report) Reply

  • Siddartha Montik (8/3/2017 9:24:00 AM)


    God write! Touchnig and deep! TY! 10+++ and congrats for Poem of the DAY! (Report) Reply

  • Nika Mcguin (8/3/2017 8:39:00 AM)


    Beautiful and very touching, It makes me wonder did he die or did something else happen? The most evoking part of this poem is the passion of the speaker, the repetitions of Im gonna miss you really convey just how important this person was and is to the speaker. amazing work~ (Report) Reply

  • Ezhil Vendhan (8/3/2017 8:14:00 AM)


    WOW, Beautiful. Enjoying your lines very much.
    I felt relieved by my stress and grief,
    When i heard your voice in the grass rustling.

    I lie down on grass and i could feel its silence,
    I close my eyes and i enjoyed your voice,
    The smell of grass was taken on the wings of wind,
    Magic lies in silence of grass and in your voice.
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  • Hans Vr (8/3/2017 6:36:00 AM)


    Extremely beautiful, heart moving, lovely poem. (Report) Reply

  • Mazloom Gill (8/3/2017 6:06:00 AM)


    your poem is so beautiful. I like it. thanks for sharing. (Report) Reply

  • (8/3/2017 4:03:00 AM)


    fragrance of grass was taken on the wings of wind.very good description..silence in the voice .that is the sound of silence.Voice of loved one soothes one's mind.Like thunder, it is so loud but silences and comforts and reassures a disturbed mind and reassures about a cosmic presence beyond the selfish designs of human on earth.
    She saw face of her loved on I, smiling in the sky.very nice poem
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  • Felix Opaleye (8/3/2017 3:49:00 AM)


    wow..... I love it this poem so much, nice work dear.... keep writing. (Report) Reply

  • Tom Allport (8/3/2017 3:39:00 AM)


    a well meant love poem of longing for someone who has now departed? ..............wonderfully written (Report) Reply

  • Bernard F. Asuncion (8/3/2017 2:36:00 AM)


    Such a comforting poem... Congrats, Cristy for being chosen.. Rated 10+++++ (Report) Reply

  • Robert Murray Smith (8/3/2017 2:09:00 AM)


    The poetess must be logical. I note that you lie in the grass of dew. There is silence in the grass but you hear a voice. The use of lower case i is off-putting. Also, note the use of 'gonna''is not appropriate. Otherwise a nice poem.

    Robert
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  • Kumarmani Mahakul (8/3/2017 1:17:00 AM)


    This is really a beautiful poem on nature and love having stunning and thrilling expression. Reading of this poem gives euphonious tone in mind. Thanks for sharing and congratulation for the poem of the day. A..10 (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, June 21, 2011

Poem Edited: Wednesday, June 22, 2011


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