Scotty Dogg

Rookie - 233 Points (Don't rightly remember. They always called me Dogg / The Potato Fields, Indiana)

Makin' A Sandwich - Poem by Scotty Dogg

frowning a frown- i notice
my beer gut-
gotta decide which to do first:
white vinegar smelly onion,
plump pulpy Toe- mater. or
lettuce.
“you’re vine ripened, YO! ”
i grab you and scream:
“Still got yer’ stem,
doncha? ” i squeeze the ball
hard. I see seeds. squirtin
juice.
right then, i put my fist through
the window.


Comments about Makin' A Sandwich by Scotty Dogg

  • (9/11/2018 12:11:00 PM)

    Frustrating times ain’t they. I know the feeling. Best regards. Sally. (Report)Reply

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  • Asif Andalib (11/2/2012 10:12:00 PM)

    I liked it thanks for sharing (Report)Reply

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  • Michael Oliver (9/6/2012 5:59:00 PM)

    Love the realism resonate with the randomness of the action- pity its missing the associated expletives as it would be in my case (Report)Reply

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  • Ellias Anderson Jr. (7/28/2012 11:15:00 PM)

    so interesting and funny. i like it. (Report)Reply

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  • Valerie Dohren (7/23/2012 8:39:00 AM)

    Very entertaining write - can just picture the mess! ! (Report)Reply

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  • (7/20/2012 2:35:00 PM)

    I luuurve your style, you are so suggestive in your sandwich write, see in my neck of the woods not sure how far it goes but sandwiches are not always made of slices of bread... great provocative piece...brave (Report)Reply

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  • (6/28/2012 9:25:00 AM)

    Wonderful. I laughed out loud. (Report)Reply

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  • Captain Cur (5/20/2012 6:59:00 PM)

    You are out there. Funny and crazy. Loved it. What was the name of that sandwich? (Report)Reply

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  • (1/25/2012 10:53:00 PM)

    LOL... Hope you didnt need too many stitches. A great write Scotty (Report)Reply

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  • (1/23/2012 6:35:00 PM)

    Hilarious, Scotty! Thoroughly enjoyed. Glad I dropt by to peruse. (Report)Reply

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  • Michael Oliver (1/22/2012 3:24:00 PM)

    you cook like me more expletives than seasoning or refinement- love this (Report)Reply

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  • Bulletcookie 2017 (1/18/2012 10:48:00 PM)

    A hairy knuckle sandwich I presume Dr. Watson...? (Report)Reply

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  • Jonny Brackney (1/18/2012 8:15:00 AM)

    there ain't many left. you're a badass, scotty. (Report)Reply

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  • Adeline Foster (1/17/2012 11:47:00 AM)

    Was prepared to enjoy this, yo! no! Off the wall puppy! Read mine - The Cat is Free -
    Adeline
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Poem Submitted: Monday, January 16, 2012

Poem Edited: Tuesday, January 17, 2012


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