Tuesday, October 21, 2014

Man Caged Himself In Zoo! Comments

Rating: 4.8

Was it a fate or
It's his last journey
That his ill fated wish of just visiting a zoo ended so cruelly!
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Geetha Jayakumar
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Tirupathi Chandrupatla 28 October 2014

Compassion and feelings of the heart are conveyed with great depth. What happened should not have happened. Hope we learn from this and will not let such incident happen again. Thank you.

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Khalida Bano Ali 24 October 2014

A nice heart touching write.

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Tribhawan Kaul 24 October 2014

Entire episode brought sadness. It was a sad reflection on the working of zoo in Delhi too where no rescue team was visible. The tiger stared the poor chap for 10 minutes and did nothing. Those 10 minutes could have been life saving had the rescuers been there. However, the poem touches the heart more so when the man could have been save. Thanks for sharing. Rated 9

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Manthra H 24 October 2014

A lovely poem ma'am...it is very touching...this poem feels Iike a direct thought from your heart...I like it a lot.

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Akhtar Jawad 23 October 2014

A very impressive poem that touched the heart.

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Kee Thampi 22 October 2014

I love the method poet's narration here she express a natural poem what happen recently in a zoo How much pain and plight, He would have suffered, Feable way it looks, I feel pity for the young boy Who was destined to die in a cruel way and we have a news of a death of a man.. And fell down directly in front of tiger Who was waiting for its feast. Surprisingly, the tiger didn't kill him immediately Time called him to the zoo I love this poet for a good poem as a deepawali gift

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Kee Thampi 22 October 2014

I love the method poet's narration How much pain and plight, He would have suffered, Feable way it looks, I feel pity for the young boy Who was destined to die in a cruel way and we have a news of a death of a man.. And fell down directly in front of tiger Who was waiting for its feast. Surprisingly, the tiger didn't kill him immediately Time called him to the zoo I love this poet for a good poem as a deepawali gift

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Valsa George 22 October 2014

It is such a heart wrenching incident! Think of the plight of his parents.... can they ever recover from that shock? Each time that terrible scene will be flashed before their eyes! The boy's suffering is over, though the fifteen minutes he saw death face to face were freezing! Even now, it makes me so upset! It is there in youtube! But I refused to see it! A moving write Geetha! We do not know if it is just an accident or part of a pre determined fate!

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Salini Nair 22 October 2014

Time called him to the zoo Situation slipped him inside the zoo......nowadays taking selfies in an irrational way turned to be a trend and he is one among those victims..................nicely composed

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Aftab Alam Khursheed 21 October 2014

Death of Maqsood whose soul flew from the cage at Delhi Zoo by caged tiger...coordinates of Death 'tween Time and Place is fixed..fate dragged him yonder at zoo thus he died thank you

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Ramesh Rai 21 October 2014

Have you heard the incidence of kolkata zoo when the smart man dared to wear a garland in the neck of a lion. How funny. your poem is current and live. nice to read. top marks.

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Bull Hawking 21 October 2014

was it really a man or a boy? you seem a bit confused...but great write right?

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Deepak Kumar Pattanayak 21 October 2014

Very touching indeed that a man had to succumb to the monster like this, fate inflicted cruelty on him.....Geetha..... well scripted with touching words

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