As the sun rises from horizon arc,
So does man rises from womb dark.
As sun gives out its tender rays,
So does child charms in innocent ways.
The sun then takes a step bright,
So does man, too, takes the flight.
The sun then comes in full mirth,
Fulfilling its duty to enlighten the earth,
To raise the clouds and to shower,
Warm the leaves and nurture.
So does man comes in full praise,
Fulfilling its duty to, the family raise,
To perform family obligations,
And abide the social formulations.
The sun then approaches declination,
After its duty and obligation.
So does man shows the reclination,
After its duties and resolution.
As sun enters the earth 's womb,
So does man enters the tomb.
This is a lovely and an inspiring write, I really enjoyed reading it today.
Hats off to this wonderful concept. Man's Ages In Sun's Stages - each line is so true, so deep in meaning. Great write!
You have brought out a striking parallel between the Sun and the Man! Man's life on Earth is like the time span and the changes from sunrise to sunset! After its duties and resolution. As sun enters the earth 's womb, So does man enters the tomb.............. these last three lines are particularly enjoyable!
A beautiful comparison of sun and its illuminating rays- from sunrise to sunset- with that of man and his life. A rare concept woven into a lovely poem!
spectacular view of our blessed cycle experience it all AS IS now! ! !
Life circles are indeed beautifull, from stars to wheather, from moss to man, like different poems of the same cosmic theme. Nicely penned and chanted, as most of yours Abdulrazak. Thanks for sharing it all!
Fascinating poem, written is such elegant manner. I perceive it like a flood of light invading every aspect of human life.10+++
A beautiful poem.................................................10
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Fantastic comparison among human life and sun beam. Marvellous depiction. An intensive and didactic poem that I like most. The last two lines are more impressive.Many thanks dear Abdulrazak, may God increase your poetic imagination.....10