Avalanche of a thousand dreams,
Engaging, raging at lifes torrent of bad luck,
Like muck it sticks and dries hard,
Like been dealt a bad hand of cards,
Wishing to wipe the years away,
Let this be my bright new day,
Grasping for a lifeline to my innermost desires,
Buried so deep now they are like an extinguished fire,
This will be quite a leap,
To unbury the hidden treasure,
Gold tarnished, ready to be varnished,
Escape into the world of arts,
Magic hand in hand with hope,
Skies eternally blue without shades of you,
Just the sun beaming down on a beautiful view,
Searching for me the inner you,
Like I'm intelligent but then you act the fool,
Complex my soul divided,
I don't know who I am,
I'm so undecided,
Artistic wanderings welds us together,
Like the sun greeting us good morning,
And the moon says goodnight with its veil of darkness,
That can hold a warning.
As I frantically search,
Embracing the goodness and loveliness,
Passing the belonging test,
No more fight I have found the serene light,
For my world inside my shell,
Is bursting open to the sound of a beautiful bell.
pearls ye chose and put with the dew metaphor very nice diction Again I have to read thank
Lovely, thought-provoking poem Hazel, with many inspired lines.
I think it's written in a stream of consciousness technique a bit complex thoughts
very moving heart... twisted and melted naturally...Artistic imagery... very well written.... Awesome....
Wonderful poel Hazel, great imagery and very artistic. Siya_! !
lovely poem Hazel. artistic wanderings welds us together. like the thought.
A good write.............I invite you to read my poems and review them.............thank you.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Many beautiful lines dat I had to read to d end. Though a complex one... Nice one Hazel ~TT~