Me Poewhit

Rating: 4.5
Here, I sit with my friends, [ THE POETS ].
WINE-my love-enraptures me.
Only to tell thee-my friends.
I love you all - 'past love'.
So-US-WE-US-SIT-LOOKING-? -? -? -?
Great spot for the BARDS to - DO.
Onward tomorrow - God knows.
HAY! ! ! ! ! new poet - HELLO.
Tell them-don't be YELLOW.
Poets creed-'truth and be free'.
WINE-just churns the soul.
LOVE-'there is no answer'.
GOD, puts all the puzzle together

5/30/2012 POEWHIT

JESUS SAVES
Tuesday, May 29, 2012
POET'S NOTES ABOUT THE POEM
Sitting here just thinking
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COMMENTS
Past love. Memories are fresh. Refreshingly cordial. Jesus Saves s all! Cheers!
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Pranab K Chakraborty 06 June 2012
Unique style of exposing loneliness within the arena of togetherness. Such a single beam of light refracts through each line....it becomes just the navigational experience perhaps to the reader. After all, the helpless (individual) creative personality surrenders to the feet of an unknown entity where he tries to consolate himself that all the problem would meet an end one day by His divine wish....GOD, puts all the puzzle together..... Beautiful situation poet has documented wisely, poets are sitting together with wine.....excellent.....
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Elna Nel 06 June 2012
Thanks, this is a pleasure to read!
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Renu Kakkar 04 June 2012
good thoughts interwoven using all poets :)
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Pheko Motaung 03 June 2012
A fantastic rumble in THE JUNGLE OF POETRY! You're fabulous Joe!
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Kasia Fedyk 02 June 2012
Joe, this is a wonderful write and Yes, He puts it all together! Fantastic.
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Marieta Maglas 01 June 2012
Amen! ''Poets creed -'truth and be free'.''-they need to find these values belonging to God and only Jesus may help them to search God.There is a single way to be existent.Great poem, Joseph, thank you for sharing.God bless.Mari.
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Persian Khushi 01 June 2012
Great toughts, nice imagery. Thank you for your comment :)
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Hi Joe, Instead of being a lonely King without a kingdom, I think it is better to be a slave to master someone ...........
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