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Me Poewhit - Poem by JOE POEWHIT

Here, I sit with my friends, [ THE POETS ].
WINE-my love-enraptures me.
Only to tell thee-my friends.
I love you all - 'past love'.
So-US-WE-US-SIT-LOOKING-? -? -? -?
Great spot for the BARDS to - DO.
Onward tomorrow - God knows.
HAY! ! ! ! ! new poet - HELLO.
Tell them-don't be YELLOW.
Poets creed-'truth and be free'.
WINE-just churns the soul.
LOVE-'there is no answer'.
GOD, puts all the puzzle together

5/30/2012 POEWHIT


Poet's Notes about The Poem

Sitting here just thinking

Comments about Me Poewhit by JOE POEWHIT

  • (6/7/2012 1:15:00 AM)

    Past love. Memories are fresh. Refreshingly cordial. Jesus Saves s all!
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  • Pranab K Chakraborty (6/6/2012 10:41:00 PM)

    Unique style of exposing loneliness within the arena of togetherness. Such a single beam of light refracts through each becomes just the navigational experience perhaps to the reader. After all, the helpless (individual) creative personality surrenders to the feet of an unknown entity where he tries to consolate himself that all the problem would meet an end one day by His divine wish....GOD, puts all the puzzle together..... Beautiful situation poet has documented wisely, poets are sitting together with wine.....excellent..... (Report) Reply

  • Elna Nel (6/6/2012 6:08:00 PM)

    Thanks, this is a pleasure to read! (Report) Reply

  • Renu Kakkar (6/4/2012 1:11:00 AM)

    good thoughts interwoven using all poets :) (Report) Reply

  • (6/3/2012 8:17:00 AM)

    A fantastic rumble in THE JUNGLE OF POETRY! You're fabulous Joe! (Report) Reply

  • Kasia Fedyk (6/2/2012 1:37:00 PM)

    Joe, this is a wonderful write and Yes, He puts it all together! Fantastic. (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2012 1:06:00 PM)

    Amen! ''Poets creed -'truth and be free'.''-they need to find these values belonging to God and only Jesus may help them to search God.There is a single way to be existent.Great poem, Joseph, thank you for sharing.God bless.Mari. (Report) Reply

  • (6/1/2012 11:18:00 AM)

    Great toughts,
    nice imagery.
    Thank you for your comment :)
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  • (5/29/2012 11:32:00 PM)

    Hi Joe, Instead of being a lonely King without a kingdom, I think it is better to be a slave to master someone ........... (Report) Reply

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Poem Submitted: Tuesday, May 29, 2012

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