Message Of Love Poem by M. Asim Nehal

Message Of Love

Rating: 5.0


We say we did it
We say we are doing it
And we say we will do it
But in real sense we are not
Did we delivered the message of Love
Did we delivered the message of brotherhood
No we did not do it in true sense
Had we done that, no brother
Would have suffered destitution
No brother would have become refugee
No one would have suffered the wars

Message is not to keep to self
Message is to deliver to all
Whether they take it or leave it
That is up to them
You cannot force or compel them
You are neither caretaker
Nor the watcher or implementer
Let us spread the message of love
To one and all.

Sunday, November 22, 2015
Topic(s) of this poem: love
COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Manonton Dalan 22 November 2015

spread message of love...this is what we need

6 0 Reply
Thomas Plotz 22 November 2015

Only with love and compassion the world will win.

6 0 Reply
Kumarmani Mahakul 22 November 2015

Delivering message of love and brotherhood is very nice and this poem is definitely very interesting poem which spreads message of love to all. Fantastic sharing...10

5 0 Reply
Chuy Amante 22 November 2015

lovely music here! the mystic jesus said we are our brother's keepers imagine a world where everybody is doing what they want done to them beautiful message brother

5 0 Reply
Rajnish Manga 22 November 2015

Absolutely correct. 'No we did not do it in true sense. We never delivered the message of love or of brotherhood in true spirit. How beautifully you have made us realise the flimsiness of what we profess or do. Thank you, Md. Asim ji.

4 0 Reply
LeeAnn Azzopardi 19 December 2022

Wait for my new Christmas poem in a few days Bravo for the poem

0 0 Reply
Dr Dillip K Swain 19 December 2022

Message is to deliver to all....yes it needs wide circulation among the people whom the specific message is intended.

0 0 Reply
Edward Kofi Louis 03 May 2016

Did we delivered the message of love? Nice work.

1 0 Reply
Loke Kok Yee 22 November 2015

with you all the way brother! thanks Asim

2 0 Reply
Akhtar Jawad 22 November 2015

A nice presentation of a bitter truth.......................

2 0 Reply
READ THIS POEM IN OTHER LANGUAGES
Close
Error Success