M. Asim Nehal

Gold Star - 163,730 Points (26th April / Nagpur)

Message Of Love - Poem by M. Asim Nehal

We say we did it
We say we are doing it
And we say we will do it
But in real sense we are not
Did we delivered the message of Love
Did we delivered the message of brotherhood
No we did not do it in true sense
Had we done that, no brother
Would have suffered destitution
No brother would have become refugee
No one would have suffered the wars

Message is not to keep to self
Message is to deliver to all
Whether they take it or leave it
That is up to them
You cannot force or compel them
You are neither caretaker
Nor the watcher or implementer
Let us spread the message of love
To one and all.

Topic(s) of this poem: love

Form: Free Verse


Comments about Message Of Love by M. Asim Nehal

  • Edward Kofi Louis (5/3/2016 4:43:00 AM)


    Did we delivered the message of love? Nice work. (Report) Reply

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  • (11/22/2015 11:57:00 PM)


    with you all the way brother!
    thanks Asim
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  • Akhtar Jawad (11/22/2015 10:10:00 PM)


    A nice presentation of a bitter truth....................... (Report) Reply

  • Kelly Kurt (11/22/2015 3:47:00 PM)


    Yes, the message must be spoken and heard but actions speak even louder. Wonderful poem, Mohammed (Report) Reply

  • Rajnish Manga (11/22/2015 11:57:00 AM)


    Absolutely correct. 'No we did not do it in true sense. We never delivered the message of love or of brotherhood in true spirit. How beautifully you have made us realise the flimsiness of what we profess or do. Thank you, Md. Asim ji. (Report) Reply

  • Kumarmani Mahakul (11/22/2015 11:53:00 AM)


    Delivering message of love and brotherhood is very nice and this poem is definitely very interesting poem which spreads message of love to all. Fantastic sharing...10 (Report) Reply

  • Thomas Plotz (11/22/2015 11:24:00 AM)


    Only with love and compassion the world will win. (Report) Reply

  • (11/22/2015 11:24:00 AM)


    spread message of love...this is what we need (Report) Reply

  • Alice Perfect (11/22/2015 11:19:00 AM)


    lovely music here!

    the mystic jesus said
    we are our brother's keepers

    imagine a world where everybody
    is doing what they want done to them


    beautiful message brother
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Poem Submitted: Sunday, November 22, 2015



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