Mind behaves like a slave
If entangled in flow of thoughts,
Carried away by the intensity of emotions,
Into shores of unpredictable destinations.
When thoughts are cajoled and encouraged,
When thoughts are supported and chased,
Then, thoughts thrive with merriment,
With identification and embrace of the mind!
It's an insightful piece of work dear madam... thanks for sharing..5 stars
This poem sat in my mind for awhile and I gave it much thoughts. It had became a slave to your poem, therefore; you are correct about the mind behaving like a slave. Thanks Geeta.
Yes Yiyan, Mind behaves like a slave. But certainly, with strong determination and will power, mind can be a Master too. Thank you, Yiyan
a very thought provoking write that is full of good advice? .............well penned Geeta
Tom, so good of you to read this poem and comment on it. Thank you so much. Stay blessed.
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Well penned on mind and emotions Geeta
Thank you Rini. Your comments are always sweet and nice.