Mind Is An Ocean! Poem by Shahzia Batool

greetings. i love your simplicity in acceptance. because i know sister, i try to be a poet in ENGLISH. But i am not even good. Your poem is of same pattern as you mentioned before. Only it differs in, not in the subject but in the title. I like it. A poem, comprehensive, but have no end (na tamaam) , rather a bit mysterious. Having less number of words and many dimensions to ponder on. Nice work. best wishes.

thoughts are waves... nice one....10 thoughts are ship that keeps going on with no limit it has time now to greet

@Ms. Indira Babbellapati: done, indira ji, let's see when it appears here...thanks for the suggestion :)

say 'mind is an ocean' not '...like...'

wonderful! Reminds me of the book by John Steinbeck 'The Pearl'

Yes, thoughts are like ocean waves. We have to be careful what thought we entertain.

A person can steal one idea but just one.... where is the talent before that.... Need steal again is not? ? ? ? And again, and again, , , , , I think this poem is about that... Liked so much Poetess.

Apparently seems to be a jumble in those few lines where oyster & pearls are hidden. And that pearl is found in the vast ocean signifying the mind....... very well done

Mind bears limitless thoughts....can excite magical things like precious gem as pearls of good ideas to the betterment of humanity!

@Shahzia, thanks Shahzia for the clarification. I think plagiarism is stealing pearls and gems of thoughts. Your poems are always thought-provoking.