I think my mind is broken?
I think my trap has sprung?
I can't keep anything in it for long,
It falls out before my thoughts begun!
I've noticed more and more these days,
That what goes in seems to all fall out!
So I've taken time to write things down,
But can't seem to find where I'd paper brought.
By: Linda Winchell
Published today 18.02
I like it so much. Thank you for sharing this great piece.
I can't keep anything in it for long, It falls out before my thoughts begun! So I've taken time to write things down, But can't seem to find where I'd paper brought. Beautiful description ofthe age and state of mind.. Loved the poem madam, Thanks for the sharing.10 for it. Subhas
I can't keep anything in it for long, It falls out before my thoughts begun! ... Excellent lines.
an entertaining poem with a surprising denouement,5 Stars for this amazing poem, God's Blessings in Abundance, your God's serving friend
Very sad to know that this was your last poem posted on this poetry site. May God rest you in peace! The title of the poem is so appropriate!
A refined poetic imagination, Linda. You may like to read my poem, Love And Lust. Thank you.
I can relate to some of the lines. Very nice n sweet poem. Thumbs up. . Pls do review my latest poem too titled 'pay a visit to a riverbank' visit
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
Love this poem! Thanks for sharing