Mistakes Poem by Vidi Writes

Mistakes

Rating: 5.0


Since the days of crawling
A part of my life
Intentional, inadvertent
A Beginning of learning cycle

Stars determine
Home makes difference
Blood Group matters
Consciousness questions

Brain fear clasps
Tongue twists
Blood stings
Demises countless

Grades - minor and major
No frames, quality not defined
Society assess as it wished
Magic mirror of life

Reputation at pledge
Ego bruised
Honesty taunts
Pain at option

Is it a yardstick?
Dignity bond?
Highway to hell?
Setback to salvation?

Take as stepping stone
Frank with disclosure
Listen to inner voice
Ego at check.

Mistakes I adore them
With each pinch I blush
Temper succumbs and I consume
Moisture in lips, I love life.

-vidi-
20-05-08

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Malini Kadir 26 May 2008

In spite of all mistakes and regrets I love life.........

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Mamta Agarwal 25 May 2008

we woundn't grow if we did not learn from our mistakes.inspite of all the regrets and mistake i too love life

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Sulaiman Mohd Yusof 24 May 2008

the mistakes is a gift its all depend on how you look at it.

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Deepti Agarwal 22 May 2008

inspite of all if one cud 'Temper succumbs and I consume Moisture in lips, I love life.'...... then i think everything is just fine..... LOVE LIFE...indeed! !

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Kesav Easwaran 21 May 2008

you love those pinches...good...that is the best way to play games with this 'bonded' life...ten

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