A moonlight walk guided by the stars,
Two lost souls searching for peace,
Caught in a single moment captured
By the touch of each other,
United by a gentle kiss.
This another compact poem and an intimate and romantic stroll. Nice. The beginning of the third line should be Caught not Cought, and the end of the forth line other singular not others plural. I hope this is of assistance and is offered in friendship.
I am spellbound! You're gifted and your poems are marvelous and they're the best! Wish you well in all your poetic endevours
Silence speaks louder than words and this poem is takes through the silent night under moonlight, stars guiding and a gentle kiss igniting love sparks. Short and sweet poem.
such a beautiful moment touch, sweet touch, sensible and romantic touch. and lost in a kiss of deep love........ a fine poem, romantic and emotional pictured few lines.. love it.. tony
A nice poem about first date, first romance Appropriate words for a good poem
Great poem that reveals the profound emotions and passion that exist.
lovely poem. Typos as noted but still a great poem. Try mine - The Bloom of Youth - Adeline