Mother Of Mine Poem by elsee daniel

Mother Of Mine

Rating: 5.0


Her love for me is deep;
and she always forgets to sleep
Her cooking is so wonderfull;
and she fed me stomach full
She taught me to read and write
and watched over me all night
Her body is full of pain,
but still she takes care of me, when i get wet in rain
She loves me lots;
so she bought a doll
And she is the most beautiful woman among the all

LOVE YOU MA

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Mubeen Sadhika 07 October 2009

Nice expression. good thought. well done.

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Shalini Sundararamalingam 06 October 2009

nice short time, was good to read.

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Eyan Desir 06 October 2009

taught....not thought but good write

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John Knight 06 October 2009

Hi Elsee - This is mega! I was 62 when my mpther died (95) and she loved me and cared for me every year of my life. There is an echo of all our mothers in your poem. Deep love - Staying up late - Supacook - teacher - Selfless - Providing all our needs. 'She is the most beautiful woman among then all' LOVE YOU MA! Well structured poem withgood rhyme. I score it MAX. Love in poetry - JOHN.

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Obinna Eruchie 06 October 2009

Adorable poem on your loving mother.

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Akham Nilabirdhwaja Singh 18 February 2016

- most beautiful woman among all..it's so beautiful.

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Emu Getachew 14 October 2009

a great tribute to the one and only one our mothers. please read my tribute and some of my works when time permit.

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Chitra - 08 October 2009

a loving tribute to your mom!

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a lovely poem from you to your mom..well done

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Shelly Shelly 08 October 2009

a very very loving cute poem.....loved it...for i portrayed my mother thru these lines again...

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