Mourning Has Broken Poem by Ruby Honeytip

Mourning Has Broken

Rating: 5.0
 


Today is the morning,
You were not my first thought,
I still lie here motionless,
But I'm not feeling distraught.
A black cloud has lifted,
I still feel you not here,
But my pulse feels stronger
I no longer fear
A future without you
Because I will never forget
That my soul dipped inside yours
The day we met.
I have missed you
More than you know
But mourning has broken
I will begin letting go.

It's time to get up......

COMMENTS OF THE POEM
Joseph Anderson 18 January 2013

Sad, but maybe not. You seem to have the handle on this. Gollee, what a meaningful title, enough imagery here for the whole story

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Lyn Paul 19 January 2013

What strength you have. Great title too.

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Joshua Fegley 23 February 2013

I like it. Good poem Honeytip.

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Stevie Taite 31 January 2013

Beautiful and full Of positive energy And wonderful like you. Your poetry sings to me. X x x I love and look forward to the smile I get from the last line. Ties it all together so well. X x x x

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Stevie Taite 31 January 2013

Beautiful and full Of positive energy And wonderful like you. Your poetry sings to me. X x x I love and look forward to the smile I get from the last line. Ties it all together so well. X x x x

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Titi Dale 21 January 2013

Wow, and moving on has brought many of us somewhere :) a great write! Simply amazing!

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Valerie Dohren 20 January 2013

A lovely poem Ruby, very tender.

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