Ruby Honeytip

Rookie - 357 Points (1970)

Mourning Has Broken - Poem by Ruby Honeytip

Today is the morning,
You were not my first thought,
I still lie here motionless,
But I'm not feeling distraught.
A black cloud has lifted,
I still feel you not here,
But my pulse feels stronger
I no longer fear
A future without you
Because I will never forget
That my soul dipped inside yours
The day we met.
I have missed you
More than you know
But mourning has broken
I will begin letting go.

It's time to get up......


Comments about Mourning Has Broken by Ruby Honeytip

  • (2/23/2013 7:30:00 AM)


    I like it. Good poem Honeytip. (Report) Reply

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  • Stevie Taite (1/31/2013 4:59:00 PM)


    Beautiful and full
    Of positive energy
    And wonderful like you.
    Your poetry sings to me. X x x I love and look forward to the smile I get from the last line. Ties it all together so well. X x x x
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  • Stevie Taite (1/31/2013 4:58:00 PM)


    Beautiful and full
    Of positive energy
    And wonderful like you.
    Your poetry sings to me. X x x I love and look forward to the smile I get from the last line. Ties it all together so well. X x x x
    (Report) Reply

  • Titi Dale (1/21/2013 11:57:00 PM)


    Wow, and moving on has brought many of us somewhere :) a great write! Simply amazing! (Report) Reply

  • Valerie Dohren (1/20/2013 3:45:00 PM)


    A lovely poem Ruby, very tender. (Report) Reply

  • Lyn Paul (1/19/2013 3:51:00 PM)


    What strength you have. Great title too. (Report) Reply

  • (1/18/2013 1:26:00 PM)


    Sad, but maybe not. You seem to have the handle on this. Gollee, what a meaningful
    title, enough imagery here for the whole story
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Poem Submitted: Thursday, January 17, 2013

Poem Edited: Friday, January 18, 2013


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