my mother was a person
who could converse with her cow
and the little rose in her garden
with mankind she had no clue
she lost to them due to her bluntness
my mother was a person
whom you could trust..any of you
you could hold her hand and walk past
any mist- there would'nt be a dug trap
waiting for you..trust worthy person
my mother was a person
who was'nt a learned one
she knew what i liked to eat more than
she knew what i liked to read..she was
a person to whom the stomach was more than the head
for a person like my mom
a poem would'nt be a fitting tribute
if i feed a few to their hearts content
it would be a fitting tribute...for
my mother was a person..to whom
the stomach was more than the head
the originality here makes one realize that it's a true depiction of your mother I do agree with Ravi - his suggestion would bring an improvement, but if you leave it stand as is it's still a decent piece
until the stomach is happy, your head cant work.your mother was a very very wise person.ihanks
a real mother knows the value of eternal love.........that only flows through your words........a goat can call her amme...not a crow.........
Samanyan Lakshminarayanan! thanks for sharing us such a poem
yes I know what you will say 'My mom is the best in the world' lovely write ++10 anjali
there is something very sweet abt this poem..........well penned
This poem has not been translated into any other language yet.
I would like to translate this poem
The way to a mans heart is through his stomach, so your mother was a wise lady.